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So I started reading this suicide fic and I was actually enjoying it until you reached the part where Spitfire just got so out of character! I mean really! You'd think Spitfire would actually feel sorry for Rainbow Dash for comitting suicide! I know I would! You wanna know something worse? Well, if you watched the season 6 episode 'Newbie Dash' you'll find that Spitfire was even MORE out of character by constantly calling RD the nickname 'Rainbow Crash'! What is it with bronies and their obsession of ponies being out of character and stooping so low as to bully their own element bearers! It's bad enough they did that in the Mysterious Mare Do Well, Newbie Dash and 28 Pranks Later, now fanfics involving Spitfire being a bully just like that season 6 episode? No! Absolutely not! You are to change Spitfire's behaviour in this fanfic this instant, do you hear me? I am not going to enjoy this suicdal fic unless you make Spitfire less of a bossy, bratty, untalented wonderbolt leader! Sorry about that. I just get very sensitive about bullying. I'll try asking again more politely. Could you please remake this fanfic so that Spitfire's more friendlier and feeling sorry and guilty for Rainbow's suicide and less of an out of character pony please? I honestly hope you read this review and take my request. Sorry about the ranting earlier. I was just too mad with Spitfire.

Hey, u probably wont read this, but i think Shattered Rainbow is a perfect title for welcome

A great story!

Oh, this was such a great story. :D Poor Rainbow...I felt for her...but at lease she has wonderful friends to be there for her whenever she needs it. :) Awesome story, 10/10. :D

I just dont know what it is about Rainbow Dash, but she makes a good feel good story character. No joke i started to cry a little at the part with the necklace. I hope that you write more, much more... if there was one thing i would change I would go a little more in to how she made up her mind to jump in the first place, you know show a little bit of contomplation (sorry for bad spelling). I love this story almost as much as My Little Dashie. I give this story a 9 out of 10

Just because something does not go your way doesn't mean you should end your life when you have good friends and do much to live for there is no horror in suicide good job by the way peace

i like the title

Email me at whoever wrote this

I almost drowned in my tears at pinkie's tail twitch.

this was a very touching story and the title is fine dont worry

I had a dream very similar to this last night... very strange.

I'm not usually one to give review or read hurt/comfort stories but i usually check out highly acclaimed stories and this was highly recommended to me by one of my friends and i have to say, this was one of the best fanfics i have ever read.

It seems as though it came straight from the show writers themselves and seems as though it should have been in an episode besides the few darker parts of it.

All in all I have to say you are a really talented writer and it even made me tear up.

I won't lie...I teared up, -quite a bit- while reading this...It was a beautiful story! :D Kept me hooked till the end. Honestly, I'm glad you chose to stick it out and write a happier ending for it. Everything fit together nicely and a rather depressing story got to end in a happier note, which fit perfectly in my opinion.

Anyway, Loved the story, hope to see more from you soon :)

You know, I usually don't read MLP hurt/comfort fics. But this one...I don't know. It was different. Heartfelt. It felt like an unaired episode. (The dialogue was so spot-on, I could hear the characters' voices in my head.) Definitely darker than the show, but not too angsty. I kinda almost sorta cried.