| Reviews for A New Terrifying Adventure |
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Guest chapter 4 . 7/2/2017 I love this story! |
Pughtwins chapter 4 . 11/18/2014 ; ) |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/16/2013 Its one if the best fanfics I've read. U have next to none writing errors( I counted 2)and I'm adding this to my faves. I don't like shallow lemon stories but I don't want fanfics that sounds like someone writing it doesn't know how katniss would get pregnant. You didn't make it like the reader was intruding into someone's bedroom but u gave what put in the search engine: katniss pregnant. I could understand the grammar in this story better than some fanfictions written by American or British authors. I love this story and I'm so glad that you put the time and effort and had the perseverance to write in English not French most people on this website, I know for a fact would NOT go to the effort to write it in a different language for their fans. Your brains and heart are amazing-BEMMA |
JeDorsToutLeTemps chapter 4 . 12/7/2012 love this story |
CowLunchbox chapter 4 . 11/9/2012 OK, I know this story is a bit old, but I just wanted to say that your English is really good for a N\native French speaker! I've been taking French at my school for 3 and a half years, and my French is nowhere near as good as your English! |
gdominique chapter 4 . 7/31/2012 this is soooo cute. keep writing |
Y chapter 4 . 7/29/2012 A very cute piece to read before bed. Made me smile. :3 |
Ashley chapter 4 . 7/17/2012 I never got enough of Peeta's reaction. It's priceless. LOL! |
Ashley chapter 3 . 7/17/2012 This is like the fourth time I've read your series. It's so well-written! But I still can never help but giggle at Haymitch and Katniss' conversation at the end of the chapter. You also really embraced each character, studied them, and definitely used their niche for your series. I LOVE IT! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012 I READ YOUR WHOLE SERIES I CANT HELP READING IT OVER AND OVER AGAIN |
Pechay chapter 4 . 6/8/2012 Awesome story, hey... IS THERE A SEQUEL? |
DayDreamer077 chapter 4 . 5/2/2012 not bad but I really don't get why you keep using colons instead of period and commas. |
DayDreamer077 chapter 3 . 5/2/2012 what is up with the improper usage of colons? |
iluvucla chapter 2 . 4/27/2012 )cute storu but the author used 10 colons in one chapter. that's extremly annoying. athorwise its a very cute story |
DocThermo chapter 4 . 4/18/2012 I thought the reactions were consistent with the characters as I interpret them in my mind as I read the books - with one exception. I think Katniss and Peeta would have actually married before they shacked up and started schtupping. I must say though that I absolutely loved the line you ended the story with. I don't think it would be possible to have a better ending! |