Can I say that this is one of the most awesomest awesomely awesome stories I have ever seen?
Well I just did.
I really like the original plotline, and the pils, they are the mindscrewer of every story. One of these days...
Well, this is still one of best stories. Poor Halt though, he knows something's not right with the disappearance but he won't be able to go after the tracks. If only you did, if only you did Halt..
Okay, to the matter at hand, you need to update. And now. I mean two years is enough to finish at least three chapters right?
Now update!

I have hope ou will still updat ...

OMG! SO GOOD! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!

That's OK- looking forward to the next ones! :D

Lily

the chappie's better be good if you make us wait! :p

This was amazing with the music playing and all. Halt definitely didn't seem to OOC. I mean, you're right. He's got nothing I don't think anybody would be to happy in his shoes.

Again, it's great. The only thing that bugs me is how okay Will is. Even if he did drug himself and the drug was wearing off, the wound he inflicted upon himself would be a drawback.

This is amazing, I think Halt is in character and Will as well. Don't know what he's planning but it sounds great

You really are good at these cliffies, I like the fight things you got going on here but a little more background might have helped some

Great cliffie here:)

I don't think that Halt is acting too OOC. I mean, he didn't really show it, but Will meant absolutely everything to him. He was the son he never had. And now, he doesn't have the three other people he cares about to comfort him. It's kind of tough. Only kind of. I bet he's imagining what the Temujai would do to Will's body. Even though I know that Will's OK (or close to it), his reaction still tugs on my heartstrings. Good job with this chapter!

Lily

Wait... so is he handing himself in or not? I guess I'm going to have to keep reading to find out, huh? Stupid writers who know how to put suspense into their stories... Just kidding. Really. That's awesome :). I love finding a good story that I can get into. Your writing style is pretty awesome, so I hope you keep writing. I'm already dreading the moment when I run out of chapters to read :)

Lily

WILL'S ALIVE! :D But now he's going to go and hand himself in... :(. This totally reminds me of the ending of Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows- have you read it? Poor Tug- he's trying to tell Halt that Will's alive, but Halt doesn't understand. At least if the Temujai do kill Will, then everybody will already have mourned. Such a sad story, but it's written beautifully.

Lily

Oh. my. god. That was intense. This situation doesn't look good... poor Baron Arald! :( The Temujai are really skilled fighters, so they'll probably start moving to Castle Araluen soon. Will's probably going to pull another stunt with his "stupid heroics", isn't he? Unless he's dead. He can't be dead! You wouldn't kill Will, would you? :( Unless he's faking? :D But then Gilan and Pauline would still be in danger... There's just too much to think about! It draws you into the story, so it's all I could do to click the review button instead of the next chapter button. SO, I should probably stop rambling and start reading... ANYWAYS, I obviously thought that this was an amazing chapter :). Love the creative story line! Stupid cliffhangers...

Lily

What? Is Will dead? Halt will never forgive him if he committed suicide... He can't be dead!

Anyways, great opener. Definitely caught my attention! Can't wait to figure what on earth is going on :) (aka click the next chapter button)

Lily