| Reviews for Core of the Apple |
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Alisha chapter 1 . 7/12/2016 Good chapter |
Graystripe64 chapter 1 . 3/9/2013 Always loved this fic. It was one of the first MLP fanfics I remember reading. I figured, I faved it on , I'll surely favorite here too! |
TheFigureInTheCorner chapter 4 . 6/30/2012 Aaaaand there it is. The chapter that broke the floodgates. You. Are. Amazing. I very, VERY rarely cry. |
Eclipse pony chapter 5 . 6/13/2012 Love it lol I'd love to see more of ur work |
Astrid-Myrna chapter 5 . 4/26/2012 I really enjoyed this story! It's totally something I'd see as an episode too. You did the characterizations very well! |
Scarlet Rabbit chapter 5 . 1/14/2012 A heart felt story, it got me a little teary eyed. |
jman377355 chapter 5 . 12/18/2011 I'm actually thinking this is just me but these last two chapters I've lost a lot of interest. I can't really point out anything specifically, I wonder if I'm just in the mood for a more actiony fic. |
jman377355 chapter 3 . 12/18/2011 Good chapter, wonder what this plan is. Braeburn was a nice touch. |
jman377355 chapter 2 . 12/18/2011 I could see AJ doing this, I'm a bit curious about RD, who'd she lose exactly? Both her parents? |
jman377355 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011 Solid start. No noticeable grammar or spelling errors and everypony is in character. |
From Darkness and Light chapter 5 . 11/29/2011 I just finished reading the story...My, you sure kept everyone in character. And, it was heart-warming as well. Honestly, I felt this story deserves more reviews...Oh, well...Anyway, I think you did a splendid job and kept everything intact as everything was in correct order, nor was it too rushed or too slow. Great job! Keep it up! Kudos! Peace out! XD |
Spectral Volta chapter 5 . 9/20/2011 really well done. worry to relief set to bed like this always makes a good story and the use of memorabilia is a incredibly astonishing addition for the story moments really great work and hope it continues |
ThrashingWhiplash chapter 5 . 9/8/2011 The fanfic gave me a warm, fuzzy feeling inside. First one I've ever gotten while reading one. That's awesome. ~DD~ |
AngelBornOfHell chapter 3 . 9/5/2011 I think that you characterized Braeburn wonderfully. The dialect and all was great. I can almost hear his accent rolling off the page! and i think it was interesting to see big mac's transition in character, from being passive to taking a more active approach |
ThrashingWhiplash chapter 3 . 8/31/2011 I usually only favorite clopfics and/or grimdarks. I'll make an exeception for this. This looks pretty awesome. I'd love to see the ending. |