Hello, AngeloftheMorning1978.
I like your story ! I think this story is very well for Erotica ! Tasteful fan fiction which involves characters in sexual situations

Sad end to Eames, I fell in love with her and the family life that Ariadne offered. No hate Arthur, he just wanted his girls back in touch but did not have much to ask.

I told you before but I really love your fic, have everything, you are great and I am happy that I still have many more to read. :DDDDD 3

sorry for my terrible English D:

JAJAJAJA revenge was fantastic, I'm dying of laughter, putting me into the shoes of Ariadne, he deserved it.
She was very intelligent and send the ultimate in security.
Although obvious qiuero to forgive him when he explains everything and I degaste very intrigued with unused condom on the floor, well I had to tell you this charming me the story. C:

Let me just say, I havent read anything in about a year, when I used to read about 2 books a week. Life got int the way, and I lost my way.
Now I have to time again and the want to go back to reading, but nothing pulls me in.
Well I loved your story. Trully, trully loved it! Thank you for writting this, you have talent!

I'm glad Arthur had his happy ending. I'd like to think Eames will eventually have his too...

Gah! This was too good! I'm really glad you turned it into something so much deeper than just smut. It was really great the way you handled the feelings of the characters surrounding the issue of abortion; while I'm pro-choice too, I also think when a woman chooses to have an abortion, or not to, she's (literally) making a decision about the lives of more people than just herself.
Overall this was a real pleasure to read! Thank you!

This story was wonderful on so many levels, as it was heart wrenching. At first I clicked on it only to read some erotica-but this was a great surprise! I really sympathized with the characters in one form or another and it's really a hard thing to pull off in writing- especially in fanfiction. keep up the good work

omg this story was beautiful, i hated and loved it at the same time. mostly hate it because of eames being selfish and depressing, adriadne being childis, and arthur being made to look like the bad guy when he was the one left out and ignored. but loved it because it was so real and just so, so... imperfect.

best story ive read all year, hands down.

Awww...lovely ending. It's good that Ariadne and Eames are on good terms. I do wish Eames would have found someone, but it doesn't always happen that way. I think you ended it perfectly. Thank you for sharing this with us, I have enjoyed your writing a lot, I like how you can manage to draw so much emotion out of me, and I always say it takes a good writer to do that.

The line that Lizzie's father says to her makes me tear up every time! It's just a wonderful thing for a dad to say and I look forward to the day when my dad says that :) So I'm glad you used it...

Okay you broke my heart i just wanted to give Eames a hug at the end but a lovely well written story. Can't wait to read more of your writing.

Hello! I really liked your fic, I think we've focused very well, so well that I wondered if it would be of little embarrassed if I asked you to write a fic about Eames and Ariadne? It had so much chemistry between them on more than one occasion I thought I would end up together despite the classification A & A, thanks and a hug!

Aww that was lovely.

Wow, what a bittersweet ending. But perfect at the same time. I kind of hate and have sympathy for every character in their own right, and it's very impressive that you've managed to do that. I've really enjoyed reading this story- such a refreshing idea, and you wrote it beautifully. Well done!

This made me cry! Very well written, though.

Yay happy A/A ending, but I feel so bad for Eames. I loved how you just let the story go though.