| Reviews for Spectrum |
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   A.J. Horn chapter 7 . 8/26/2011 Short but nice, a good use of the color... The last one made me melt... |
| wild-and-whirling-words chapter 7 . 8/26/2011 Again, another really cute drabble without it becoming contrived or overly-fluffy. As a rule, I only really read or 'ship Marauder pairings but this is such a good story. Brilliant :) 1. 5/5 - you're writing and grammar is great (I wish mine was that good!) 2. 4.5/5 - I love the drabble, but again feel if you got a bit stuck on this one although I can't honestly say I blame you! 3. 5/5 - again, flawless use of characters and all-in-all an amazing fic :) |
| wild-and-whirling-words chapter 6 . 8/26/2011 Sweet :) at the age when boys are possibly starting to look at girls in a new light the awkwardness is tangible. 1. 5/5 2. 4.5/5 - because I think that "indigo" could have possibly been more than just the colour in this scene, although it is a hard one to write. 3. 5/5 :) |
| wild-and-whirling-words chapter 5 . 8/26/2011 Aw...I'm sorry, that actually made me "aww" out loud. A perfectly written scene that should've been in the books. I love the way that Hermione, ever-strong, cracks here and admits her feelings and I like the way she and Harry are united in emotion without it being overbearing or fluffy so good job and FULL MARKS :) |
| wild-and-whirling-words chapter 4 . 8/26/2011 A brilliant play on the concept of jealousy, incorporated with the themes of Slytherin within. Ron, obviously, flawlessly written and Hermione also, true to form. 1. 5/5 :) 2. 5/5 :) 3. 5/5 :) |
| wild-and-whirling-words chapter 3 . 8/26/2011 Again, very good - I like the way this story goes back to before the realisation of romance and the way you incorporated the colour :) 1. Good writing and grammar - 5/5 :) 2. Reference to colour - 4.5/5 3. Characterisation - 4.5/5 |
| wild-and-whirling-words chapter 2 . 8/26/2011 Very cute :) light and humorous, so indictive of Ron's character and the lovely sharp tone we associate with Hermione. 1. Good writing and grammar - 5/5 :) 2. Reference to colour - 5/5 (I think the way you linked back to a fact we already know about Ron and using the Cannon's was an inspired idea, instead of choosing something like his hair as many may have been tempted to do) 3. Characterisation - 5/5 :) |
| wild-and-whirling-words chapter 1 . 8/26/2011 A brilliant first chapter! It's nice to see another side of Hermione and I like the reference to the colour. It's very well thought out and well written as well. 1. Good grammar and writing - 5/5 2. Reference to colour - 5/5 3. Characterisation - 5/5 |
| Sammy-U chapter 7 . 8/25/2011 These are all awesome 3 loved it :))) |
| little-black-blue-hood chapter 7 . 8/25/2011 This is a really good story. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
