A very interesting darker tale. I'm looking forward to reading Maura's version, too.

Very interesting read!

I'm really late to this party. However you've written this so beautifully. I wonder, is there a sequel or will you pick it up again? I really loved this

wow this was some read im glad i stayed up to read it and at 1.15am methinks its bedtime lol

Holy crap. I am working my way through your Rizzles fics, and they are EXCELLENT. But this. THIS... is just gorgeous and brilliant. Chapter 17 practically made me weep with the sweet, loving, angsty Rizzles. ("You ALWAYS know...") You [both] are a real talent, and I can't tell you how much I appreciate you sharing your excellent work.
I've read (or at least begun) just about all the M-rated and most of the T-rated Rizzles fics on this site, and your body of work rises to the top. But this story in particular really captured me. I've read a lot of fics around some of these same canon events, and this one is spot on. The plot, dialogue, sprinkles of canon and your characterizations of J and M are incredibly well done. And it feels very natural that Jane would turn to alcohol, after she's been through all the craziness and horror that canon-Jane has been through. Especially if you add closet-case to the list of her baggage - which again, is not a stretch.
You, alone and with Googlemouth, are a real talent, and I can't tell you how much I appreciate you sharing your excellent work.

Fantastic story, with great psycho-analytical insight. The characters are so well portrayed. Very well written.

It's always good to read a fic about Jane dealing with PTSD. One of the (many) things the TV show doesn't show us and they could have like a gold mine down that path but they don't take it.
Read the final note about how you wrote the psychiatrist part. I must say that you got pretty there. They don't talk or ask many questions. They simply *makes* us talk without us noticing it.
Really like reading this fic. Will read the next two! Great job!

This was great... I'm off to read Maura's POV now. Fantastic.

Hello Jane you want a turtle "Tortoise"... you are so clearly in love with Maura... lol

I love that Tommy gets it... I really do.

And there we have it... poor Maura *hugs*

10. Never Get Caught. Um has Jane forgotten who her best friend is? *shaes head*

Can you continue this story?! I love it

Wow! Great story... Thank you. :D

I normally just read on this site and don't comment or review, but this story, oh this story. I made me laugh and cry and swoon. The two of you really need to write for this show. This story was about 10 times better than anything they've ever actually produced. It was so in character and stayed so true to the friendship and devotion and was so honest with the workings of therapy, addiction and coming out to yourself. I absolutely adored this. Thanks so much for writing it!