Reviews for Unraveled
Guest chapter 1 . 1/7/2017
amazing :)
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
This makes my heart hurt. Beautifully written!
TurtlesAndCanada chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
I think I hate you. I really, really do.
Tamagoakura chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
OMG these feels! Fuck I had to get up and walk away for a moment to collect myself. This has the same feeling as Dolphin, and that doujin really messed me up man. ;A;
RayenOfDeadStarsAndPlanets chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
! THIS WAS SO AMZAING AND TERRIBLE AND UGH! -dies-
iChocoLove chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
Wow. That was absolutely amazing. Beautifully written, vivid descriptions and wonderfully captured feelings and emotions.

At the end, I couldn't help but wonder if Alfred - the human, I'm thinking? - will eventually find out that Canada is well, a nation, and how he would take that. And that he's pretty much America.

ASDKLF;AJSDJFL;DS /freakout session.
Loveless6373 chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
Waaaaahhhhh ;;

I loved it and yet hated it~!

What made me love it was the way it was written and AmeCan is my ultimate favorite pairing!

and the reason why I hate it was because it made me cry...(thinks about it, over and over again)...

WAAAAAHHHHHHHHH~!
lame arse chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Wow.. OhmyGod, wow.

My heart breaks for Matthew. I know it must've took his evey bit of strength and courage to let Alfred go, and be so selfless enough to want his happiness even when he knows he'll suffer forever after.

This story really breaks my heart.

It's just beautiful.
HanatsuKoneko chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Wow, just... wow.

My heart.

This is so tragic and painful to read, but hopeful at the same time... just oh my god.

Your characterization is beautiful, the way Canada wants nothing more than for America to be happy.

5/5.
wiwiun chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
My heart.. Oh, my heart.

Such a bittersweet little ending. This story is absolutely.. Just..

I'm just speechless. There's so much emotion packed in your words.

Just.. *sobs*. I really am guttered by the quality of this fic.

Lovely~

(I'm wondering, and I apologise if I am wrong, but could you possibly be perfectlymaple? Of DA and FFnet?)
Rapier-of-Red chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Wow, that was-

amazing almost doesn't seem to do it justice; neither does beautiful.

That was stunning and heart wrenching. It was captivating from beginning to end and an ache settled in my chest as I read. The emotional tone your writing style sets is so vivid and real that I could almost feel the shattering that Matthew and Alfred felt in their own respective ways.

Wonderfully moving story! C:
Kaede-tama chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
This is just...beautiful. I can't find any other words to describe it. You captured their pain so well, and the 2nd person point of view really added to the effect. And that last sentence just left me with this feeling of a kind of sadness, but joy at the same time that in a sense, Matthew and Alfred found each other again.

Again, wow. I love this.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
That was so beautiful! I love how you portrayed Matthew! You didn't make him such a damsel! And his relationship with Alfred was so pure and simple yet so lovely because they knew that needed each other to survive! And that wouldn't have it any other way!

I love this! Keep writing!

Au revior,

Matilda