You should continue this :)

So beautiful! I couldn't stop crying! It was so sad and beautifully written! Great job! :)

This story has officially blown me away. This was brilliant, and it was a true pleasure to read. I loved the beginning in “No! No, Fred! No!” It grabbed your attention whether you wanted to or not. My immediate thoughts were, what the hell is going on? I must read more. If I was like that then I bet your other readers had similar reactions. I also love Fred's reaction to realizing he is dead, it was very realistic. This was a really sad chapter and it really moved me. I feel so sorry for George's loss and you made his grief very realistic. This is by far the BEST story I have ever read!

This was heartbreakingly sad but I can't help but love it :) I think my favorite line was the last one. "His hand entwined with the invisible one of his twin who he now knew would always be with him." It's perfect. - Jules

OK, I've read this over and over. I love it. Every time it makes me tear up, and I would LOVE a sequel. This is probably the best Fred's death fanfic out there! I love the twins, and this is amazing; both points of view in completly different worlds. Please continue...

Crying!

I almost started crying...

Beautiful, emotional...

Absolutely heartbreaking, but so beautiful. Bravo.

Oooh, so sad! So good! Different, highly enjoyable.

I hope the afterlife isn't really like that... anyway, great fic. Very sad. Great job. :)

This is such a sweet, sad, loving story. I absolutely love it! Any chance you'll continue it?

Thanks so much for the dedication :3

I cried so much seeing both Fred and George, but unable to see each other.

It's also nice to have some Fred in, just to see his feelings too :)

By the way - You are officially getting English teenagers up at 7.20 am to read your FF and then sit in front of the computer crying their eyes out (me) xD

woow! that was almost like all the saddest parts of double or nothing pressed together into one single one-shot :'(

just keep up the good work, and looking forward to your next fic! and since maybeyou wont get double or nothing published ( you never know though), couldnt you start writing a non-hp novel? cause youve really got the talent, all you need is some self-invented characters and a good plot, then you could build your own world just as jkr did!

THAT WAS THE GREATEST ONESHOT FRED AND GEORGE AFTER THE BATTLE FANFICTION I HAVE EVER READ. YOU WIN AN AWARD

Oooh, this story had me sobbing! So beautiful! I loved the part about their hands entwined, so sad, but very sweet. Lovely 3