Reviews for The White Chrysanthemum
Guest chapter 6 . 10/3/2015
Nice.
TripOverFlatSurfaces chapter 6 . 6/15/2015
WHAT IS THIS PERFECTION
Smiling Seshat chapter 6 . 3/22/2015
This was funny. :)
kalmaegi chapter 6 . 1/7/2015
The Varia are out of their depth when it comes to handling someone like Sasagawa Kyoko. And people wonder how she gets away with everything. It's charm and the amazing ability to not ruffle feathers. Dork Varia getting described so perfectly by Kyoko? Awesome.
RustedEagleWings chapter 6 . 5/27/2014
Awesome story!
Cavallo Alato chapter 6 . 4/10/2014
Ahh, I absolutely loved this! Everyone is written extremely well, and I love how Kyoko's tenderness affected them all!
AceXCore chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
This is such a funny and sweet story! love it!
69AnimeFreak69 chapter 6 . 12/15/2013
ahahahahah I wish I could have SEEN the Varia then... and also, you say the Varia / Vongola don't go in the same sentence as public transportation?
we'll see...
Guest chapter 6 . 12/11/2013
Wow... That was interesting
Minirowan chapter 6 . 11/20/2013
This was hilarious! It wasn't the kind of funny one would laugh at, but the kind that's adorable and amusing all at once.

I wish there had been an episode/chapter in which the Varia had to deal with a normal person. We've only ever seen them interact with people they saw as a threat or wanted to fight. What's so intimidating about a civilian? Granted, said civilian probably would have run a way screaming regardless, but it still would have been interesting if it were someone remotely like Kyoko.

Anyway, it's good to see the Varia act like normal people, if only for a few minutes. If I think too hard about their psychopathic tendencies, namely Bel since others may be considered somewhat sane compared to him in the clinical sense, I have trouble visualizing a normal day for them.

Great job!
AeroShylph chapter 6 . 5/5/2013
This is brilliant. YOU are brilliant! I've read several ("few", forgive me) of your KHR stories and they are wonderful!
Thank you for sharing your marvelous works.
creativesm75 chapter 6 . 4/4/2013
Funny
Shiki105 chapter 6 . 2/16/2013
Awwww, serene!Xanxus is kind of...cute?! And that feels just as wrong as it sounds O_o Great story! I like how you depicted the characters - ALL of them, which is a very rare and good thing in fanfiction. Good job! I shall now favourite this! I'm so glad I was shuffling through TV Tropes' Reborn! fanfic recs xD

Happy writing!
Shiki105 chapter 5 . 2/16/2013
Awww, the little bit at the end was so cute! And wow, Shamal sounds so...tame. I'm spooked. O_O
Guest chapter 4 . 2/16/2013
Lol! Xanxus making soup is so...mindblogging O_O

The Varia's culinary antics aside, the writing's great. A few mistakes here and there which could be seen as typos. Nothing major. Good work! I look forward to the rest of the story!
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