Thanks

I see your Rewriting it as well for this story and Pm me and let me know went the new story of this is up as well and I'm very curious and like a good sekirei story as well? I was going to review all the chapters but since your working on a new one of this story and please let me know and its been a long time since this story is up and like to know if your working on a new story of this in 2017 as well?

good start

Hopefully the Overhaul will make sense. Everyone follows the utter stupidity that was canon... A college age student getting access to free money and not using it. Unreal. Izumo inn not taking that money? Plausible. While she could instead take their money to spite them, being emotionally attached means she might indeed refuse their money. But if he just used the MBI card at am ATM and took out cash to pay his rent, she'd never know where the money came from. And why would Minato need to stay at Izumo Inn anyway? Unlimited money! He could buy his bown damn house. Near Izumo Inn if he was worried about being nearby. As long as shit makes sense instead of following stupid anime tropes, it'll be good.

Good story!

enjoyed the chapter

Enjoyed the chapter, hope he makes it on his own.

Another good chapter. Hope he wings Akitsu

Looks good, keep up the good work.

OK, I enjoyed this chapter , but if Karasuba was reacting to him, why would you let her be winged by someone else? I get that you are staying close to the original, but I didn't think her the kind to let something she is possessive for get taken away.
Enjoyed it, Keep up the great work.

I was debating writing a review since your last update was so long ago, but I've gotten to this point and just wanted to say I've really enjoyed what I've read so far. You put across the great bond and relationship of Takeshi and his Sekirei without the need for 'lemons'.

A few grammatical errors here and there but not major ones. Overall a very good piece of writing and I'm still looking forward to the last two chapters. :)

I can tell this story is gonna be epic! Shame you haven't updated it in so long though :(

Excellent story i trully hope to see more updates for this

Man, a year down. I take it this fic is dead then? Pitty. It was a good ride. Hell, it was pretty epic.

Well, this story was the latest in my sprees of sekirei fanfiction consumption, and I guess it's time for me to review-
First of all, nice job. You've done something I hadn't quite counted on, creating a character with a different backstory than Minatos, but still taking Minato's place. Not only that, you've given him his own character that manages to stay solid, unlike many others I've seen (Game changer, you could have been so much more...).

You've made main characters out of two-bits almost EVERYONE just tosses aside, so kudos there, as well. In fact, should I write anything about Sekirei (rather likely, given how much I've read in the last week alone, not to mention the manga's recent events) I may have to stop myself from writing them similar to yours. Your original characters aren't bad at all, and I find myself wanting to learn a little bit more every time they show up.

Your usage of Homura has also been refreshing, if a bit grim. It's always ...nice? to see new things like that.

I'd ask for more, but since this is on hiatus, I suppose that won't be happening soon. Ah well, I can wait, I suppose. When it updates, it updates, and I'll be there to read it.