I liked this story more in the begining when Not a wasn't such a pushover

Love this story! I hope you will continue this story! You should totally have Lakota kiss Edward to be like now you know how it feels and just to piss off Bella like see you kiss my man I kiss yours. And I kind of hope you make Lakota get along with Emmett and Rosalie because they would be amazing as befriends with her.

Love the story please update soon.

Please rupdate soon and add something that she cant forgive over dumping him

She needs to kick him to the curb after she grows a set

Mad at Jacob think she should say question have to chose between me or Bella and vamp had both who would you chose to save love to read the faction to that please come back

hope you update soon. love your books! on to your next book!

Wow! Ur oc is kickass!:)

loved it

Glad ur back, but I will say my intrest has decreased when it comes to twilight stories but I'm willing to see this one through

I'm now 18 & I've checked this damn thing once a month for years to see if you've updated I'm so damn happy rn ok now I gotta read bc too excited

Honestly, I had thought you abandoned this story and I resigned myself to never knowing how it ends. I've been here since the first few chapters of "What a Twisted Happy Ending". I used to check constantly if you would update, but eventually gave up. On a happier note, welcome back~ I hope you will also update "The Girl Next Door". See you next chapter~

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CHANE/TRANSFORMATION Lakota's PACKS STOP DDON'T NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! RI;P!VEins SNAPPED With a violence then HOWLED BUT With myself gone grazed for a army of my own then Bella's SCREAM WAS heard BITTEN WITH A force of violence gONE Without blood for weeks tasted it but VEEEENOM Soaring ten suddenly Volturi stepped in I was a frightened scared newborn it that her we wan you there who turned you I screamed beging howling thrashing was a unstable newbornFelix take care of her she is not well pity she dies tonight NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! CRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACKED! With them with best friends with Bella Swan broken this rule then SNAPPEED Without a head with their heads successfully but tIME-sPLIT SCREAMIG THRASHING WITH THEM AS ALL OF THEM ALICE SOMEONE KILLED Lakota SHE'S CHANGING With Bella with best friends they were next then EXECUTED! Popped but stripped of my human life lost memories suddenly had a host shattering was destroyed so Bella felt different but BLASTING From here could see Future eventsTime-split into only two tey took te Carnivorous selves who EXPLODING! then CRUNCHING From with out of te wob children with ourselves punished by the guad BLAZING! Popped bUT CRASHING! Unable to reproduce at all with each both kids went along BLAZING! Truest fire tHEN SNAPPED! then Freed then took tem to their own masters Master a Fedration word about Lakota she's a Half-breed with Bella with tem are mutants had childrenblasting freely are severly pushed for bitting children had as all of venom blacked out and freed my brother broth tem in they are forced to live as Cullen members as all of them blacked out but lost memories of their past lives and humanity is stripped from them are Venomous officially freed of their own mouths the rest brought as all we informed she is a newborn but hunted more than as all of both broken they we have news tey as all of tem been destroyed are unable to see them they been changed illegally newly-created but just born again are newborns hunted animals but crashing freely are unstable ones Crshed forth but te last cursed them but are unable y to sleep of the host shattering deactivating made them Immortal but dead forbidden tomake more children here they come too late myself was a unstable newborn imprint gone in heat Alce she was attacked with them then too late ten popped freely then te final brought as all of them Alice how's bella stable she is not herself but sick puked Greenish blood has Red eyes with venom it's changing her two bites I feel so alien but strong leanbut Athletic oops used too much Bella listen you are in fact a Vampire slayerCharile deport weaponry I am going to teach you to slay be a fiercer slayer that herself became a Vampire slayer with myself gained but POPPED! Crashing freely ten suddenly lost as all color of te skin looked really paler very pale mess with me Victoria you'r Sushi say hello to the new and improved Isabella Swan-Cullen Vampire slayer it is a Vampre with combat skills and a planet power not this Time Rin jin rrpyu pryu retsu kai chi bai zen xai bai hn zen EVIL SPIRIT BE GONE THhen BLASTING With her with witnesses with us crashed then reawakened then the bodies as all of them taken from here ten we were not humans but Half-blood from the gods and goddeses then CRASHING! Fully-time then lost our humanity officially taken them away then lost te need to mate anymore then it was too late Alice felt my heart dead like hers with their hearts stopped beating herself hadslained Victoria was now a senior Vampire slayer who was a special Vampire assassin trained in combat felt loyal but fiercer but lethal but strong powerful then CRUNCHED With us/them with as all from around the world time-Split but Poppingus/s allof them with hr snapped then blasting freely ten took them from here reported Isabella Marie Cullen killed Victoria by her father's cursed gun slain her have died from heart failure we ended her with tem then it really happened killed but murdered then herself was Immortal so as myself with them came too late she tried to breathe she couldn't not was altered but it made newly immortal just born like me Alice what is wrong she is swearing Vengeance cursing in Gaelic to as all of languanges as all of the languages right onto the Volturi she's not human at all but is a Immortal Vampire slayer then CRASHING! Then popped but unable to have a heartbeat then they torn us with her with as all ripped! Then blazed in fire but releaed more that was the end of us tem but fred wwere with as all of them too late killed wre former newborns wwre more than as all of them with each five ten stopped death blasting freely then snapped then NUKING! The bodies as all trigazillions or more taken fro here with pets had young then with as all of kids shattering then too late freed then no longr our world their planet then popped from here SNAPPED! Then gone from here then unable to be killed and suddenly be slain then never died at all we undead officially smashing then lost the rights freedom law as all of them where am I I am ariid you died but granted Immortity butcan't be killed or to pass away you are immortal like Connor Maccloud last of his clan you are a Highlander Vampire slayer it's my host how old I am 126 so the are going to fight with swords but te bodies are no longer there crud I died great we must fight together e are a Army TO WAR! Suddenly Bella was really mad suddenly letting loose a more monstrous trilling War cry come boys wanna a picece of me there is only ONE! That a strangest static charge waspsionic killed her her first Vampire group began having it was the Quickening felt as all previous lives she was a Immortal with hen oh my god Bella what is happen she lived it's 1960's to 1970's she is not human she is killed but made immortal by mistake trapped in a body of a young woman ten it came too late burst freely wwre as all of them taken but killed ripped off the heads now as a Immortal species we were unable to be slain.

Is it awful that I kind of want Kota to kick Smella's ass? Glad that she doesn't forgive Jacob right away because yeah he seems to have a Smella fixation.

TOTALLY NOT TRUE I'M STILL HERE!