Oh my god. I am at a loss for words, honestly. This is ine of the best pokemon fics I have ever read and I can’t wait for what’s next!

Why did you never finish this!?

Incredible! The individual changes you have made from the original story are quite subtle, yet you have lifted canon to something much more refined. I hope inspiration will strike you for a new update

i love sandile. he's so sassy! XD ghetsis is completely on my shit list! volcarona is at least ONE of my few favorite bug type pokémon (and that's like, 1 out of two; i don't much like bugs at all in any circumstance) and he just killed it! not to mention getting in between N and Kendra. at least he didn't see the sac. soooo, that means kendra gonna have a larvesta in the future? :D you have three instances of the nickname fer hydreigon: dreigo, dreiyo, dreico. are they three different names fer the three heads? so many things fr fr. i can't remember my reactions i had to some of what i read. it was just so interesting i couldn't stop reading, haha. took me an... hour and a half? more? to complete the chapter. darn, i can't read fast at all. i need to pause and picture everything i read. i can't just zip through like how some of my friends do. nevertheless, i can't wait fer you to update again! this story is so interesting! even if you know what really happens in the end in the game, yer story makes it difficult to predict what will happen next at times. i'm loving orin more and more. definitely my fave out of the Triad, but Sec'lor's gaining some sympathy from me as well. i gotta admit, i desire more N screen time but then these other events need the limelight, i know, but i love N. i wanna know all that's going on with him. qq well, hope to see you next chapter! keep up the good work! xx

at the beginning of this chapter i swore it was you responding to reviewers. i want to give cales the benefit of the doubt that his being in a meeting was just a coincidence. especially after the scene of ghetsis' meeting with the other sages. but i'm wanting to not be trustful and say that diana might be in trouble. also, i even fergot completely about the triad since they only appear like, ONCE in the entire black and white game. i've never played b2 and w2 where they appeared more frequently. i had to google who they were. like, wow. you went and gave them flesh and life! incredible. i find the way you incorporated the news into the scenes so that we could know what's going on with the other gym leaders along with the elite four in the background while keeping an air of mystery. it was unique.

omg. you just had to bring aol into this. this is hilarious. i can even imagine the dial up sounds it makes. XD that bit of nostalgia. i never personally had an account with them (i was given a disk but i wasn't so good with computers myself back then so i didn't know how to set it up or was even sure if i'f successfully made one) but i remember some friends having it and complaining. thanks for that throwback, lmao. i enjoy the ways you seem to bring in all the irl stuff into the world of pokémon. that's why i comment on them mostly. as i've said before, yer a talented author. makes me feel very lacking in terms of my own writing, haha. everything is so well thought out that it's hard to see you struggling along in the background to connect things and such. keep up the good work. *hurries along to the next chapter*

darker? i didn't think it could get any darker than this. *rubs chin* well, i know now who burgh reminds me of! bob ross! XDD i mean, i know you were inspired by the dürer guy like you mentioned, but i couldn't help think of bob, especially with his afro, lmao. sorry. ;; miranda rights caught me a little off guard. i mean, it's essential when arresting but i would have thought there would be another name used for that here. wonder what kind of trainer miranda was? if he even was a trainer at all. would be interesting, though, lol. and where is Looker when you need him? where tf is Looker? i'd bet he'd the one guy who would put these shits behind bars! god, i hate ghetsis. hated him before but now i hate him even more! _ putting doubts in poor N like that. gah. i was hoping mercer wouldn't be next on the hit list especially when you switched to a scene of him. i was like, "he's gonna die, isn't he." then he saw the blood and i was screaming for him to walk away! *sigh* i'm anxious to read the next chapter, though, so i'll get right on to it. i especially wanna know what happens to poor N. qq

damn, chick, yer going all out. poor mindi! i was kinda hoping she would live, but damn. LOL. owell. you have a clever way of using words. did i say this before? i think so but maybe not. that doesn't make it any less true. the way you use the lightning and ire to describe their reactions in their kiss was very well thought out. i was almost finished with the fire in her veins part when i realized what you were doing. yer very talented! and i was kinda wondering when she would meet hilbert. i like how it is you made them meet and i kinda felt like a fool for her when she didn't immediately recognize him even though she'd never met him before. all i kept saying was, "wonder how you'll feel when you find out." lol, i think orin is by far my most fave of the triad... probably the only one i like ever since he made that crack at novus fer confusing the cd drive for the usb port. this chapter just made me love him all the more. XD familiar scenes are coming by, but damn! whoever nabbed N has such bad timing, dearlord.

yes. yes, you are. anyway, i find that you added the L&O into this mix in this fashion: law and order: SPU! really? r u srs? if i was drinking i'd be spitting! XD shoot, if i was being held because the officers were dragging their feet and getting mad at me for doing something, enough to arrest me, then i would make a damned mess, too! flick everything everywhere fer them to clean up afterwards. small price to pay fer not going after dangerous people! kendra told them what for: "y'all seemed busy." XD these chapters glare getting more and more entertaining. best pokémon fic i've read so far.

damn, that was savage. i was expecting dark, but murder? now this i like! as much as i love pokemon, i really enjoy some death and drama (depends on the drama, that is). you also put a lot of thought into characterization so that they come alive and not remain just basic necessary side characters that give you things on yer quest. i at least felt proud of myself fer getting that green house one correct. i was like, "what? i dunno, jeez, green?" then i thought 'wait, it's made from plants. no, that don't make sense. wood! no, wait, a green house has plants and flowers AND trees! a green house is made of glass!' XD i was overly excited, lmao.

yeh, definitely like this N better. he's mean but that devious side of him is fun to read. ghetsis reminds me so hard of zira, but that's alright. i loved zira. even if she did go a little loopy in the end. loved this chapter. i feel like i'm fergetting something, though. bah, owell. it'll prolly come to me later.

i dunno, despite N seeming innocent in the game and ignorant of human interaction, i've never seen him COMPLETELY as innocent as some of the authors on this site make him out to be. in fact, i'm pretty sure N has some porn magazines stashed in his room somewhere, if not from getting out in the world before then to get them on his own, then at least spying one somewhere a Plasma grunt fergot it or something and being curious. XD i'm joshing, i really have no clue, but it's nice to see someone stepping out of the norm and making him a bit more realistic/have more flaws that would make white (yer kendra) have more reason to be wary of him. i mean, i already like how you made black her half-brother, and then there's the fact that i immediately thought of Zira when i read the quote "You are ready" Ghetsis made to N. XD really liking this fic. :)

awwwwhh, i was really hoping she would pick snivy. *sigh* owell. i like oshawott, too, but i've always loved serpentine pokemon anyway. finally, a mature fic. i've been looking fer one all day that included n and touko. and you write really well, this will be enjoyable.

Dear, dear, dear, I'm in love right now. This last chapter left me breathless, heart pounding and hands shaking... I have to deal with the heartache only the best stories can inflict.
Never before I have loved a fanfiction this much. This is near perfection, I've found a story that matches exactly how I feel the pokemon world, how I imagine the story and universe of Black and White. Thank you so much!
I really hope you'll offer us the end of this story, best luck!

I spent the last couple of days reading all 18 chapters thus far. I've thoroughly enjoyed the story - I have absolutely no complaints. I love how detailed and descriptive the chapters are, I also really enjoy the thoughtfulness that went into this. The fact that you elicit death within the Pokemon realm is a nice breath of reality and realism. I absolutely love that you've done this. I think many people who play the game forget that Pokemon can, in fact, die. I sincerely hope that your story is not permanently on hold and I'm hoping that me clicking that follow button isn't in vain. You're a fantastic writer, I hope to see more from you!