No one writes kakashi POV as well as you. Write more kakayama please

You have to write more now :) that's a cliffy!

Oh my gosh, I'm so happy you've updated, this is one of my favorite stories! You write really well, and I like the way you wrote Yamato and Kakashi. I look forward to another chapter.

You are such an awesome writer, so I'm really depressed that we seem to have lost you. Hope you do come back to finishing this story someday, or just to start another fanfic, even if it's in another fandom.

This is really one of my most favorite kakayama out there. Exactly the kind of story I like best, and very superbly written.

I actually liked your Kakashi better than your Tenzo. Both are good though, I'm enjoying it :)

omg I can't believe you didn't update this! T_T I'M DYING HERE! please please update, I really wanna know what happens!

Very nice, I love all the characterization and back story between the two. Poor Kakashi...Poor Tenzou... It's so horrible, and I love it. :)

Oh, and no worrys about writing too much. I'm pretty sure we won't mind :)

(And however aweseome the clifhanger may be, I'm not lovin' that so much...)

Ahhh i love your FF it's really fun to read and especially the change of perspectives is a nice idea! :D *Nya* More pls! :D

"Maa. I would have liked to live a little longer—see the kids grow up, and all that. The Icha-icha Paradise series isn't finished yet, either. But… maybe it's better to die while it's still going? There's nothing worse than the end of a good series…" - That could very well have been his last thoughts and he chose to think about Icha Icha? Generyally I liked the humour in this chapter, it made it much lightr than it should have been, if you catch my drift. I did not get the ending, though. Hurry up and update this, I'm fairly sure that I didn't catch the meaning of the kanji. Oh, and I'm delighted that things are looking better for Tenzou even if he doesn't know it yet. It's a shame, though, that Sai had to say something for Yamato to go back to Kakashi, but I suppose it all worked out in the end. Update soon.

Oh no! I really hope that Tenzou never found out about the dog collar. That was horrible! I can't say I'm proud of Kakashi's way to handle this, but then again I don't really know what he should have done different...

Wow! I was really caught up by this. It was an excellent depiction of both Tenzou and Kakashi. I like the idea of Tenzou as a socially awkward penguin. Also, this is an amazing character sketch (if you know what I mean). The reader was really drawn in by Tenzou's thoughts and feelings, at least I were. Oh, and the dog collar thing was just as horrible to reader about as I'd feared, if not worse. What a horrible thing to do. I'm glad he never acutally showed it to Tenzou. On another note, I was thrilled that you put Hayate and Yugao in there, if only for few lines. It was really well-incorporated the way you had Tenzou finding out more about Kakashi's past.

I think you handled Kakashi well. He was fairly laid back and composed as he is in the series so I would definitly say he is at least somewhat in character. It's a shame that he didn't listen to what Tenzou was saying. Sakura needs to taste that stuff before she makes it xD!

Well, it sucked that Tenxou had to make that house, but at least he got out of doing the dishes. Kakashi's such a jerk to him, he needs to learn to not be so easily swayed. I was kind of hoping Kakahsi would behave better too, actually. Oh, well... on to the next chapter

Nice save by Yamato with the stretching and nonchalance stuff in the beginning. Sai's cute as usual, Yamato should have know better than to think he could hide it. He should've just made something believable up instead to tell Sai, get him off his back...

I was delighted to see that there was a sequel for that story... and more than just a little surprised to be honest. You did a fine job with this and I'm looking very much forward to the next chapter.
Damn you, Sai, for blowing Yamato's not-so-perfect "cover". At least Sakura kind of saved the day. By the way, I was really surprised to remember the episodes with Isaribi. People never use the filler episodes of part one for anything... I like it when they do, though. It's always nice to know that I'm not the only one nerdy enough to remember xD!