too bad this was never finished. good story

And Bianca watches anyway, against all better judgment, as Marissa walks out the door – overhead bell ringing happily up above the lawyer's head – and, god, it feels like years ago instead of days; it feels like years ago that Bianca rattled out an orgasm into Marissa's mouth and something formed between them while they were not looking.- best ever!

Thank you for the update it was amazing as always. You were missed. I crave the way you weave a story please dont take so long to update... please?

IS IT AN ABANDONED STORY?

UPDATE?

i think uve forgotten this one. no not please coz i know that ur going somewhere deep. ur writing is exceptionally amazing i may say

YOU have officially lost me with this story... ;) but that night in mexico is really troubling me...what really happened there? maybe an update can answer that. ;) i like your style. i know you are going somewhere.

Again, fabulously well written! I hope you're looking forward to continue this amazing story! :o)

Nice.

Beautiful.

Elegant.

You are so good with the complexities of subtle gestures and easily over-looked moments.

Beautiful! Different direction? Maybe - right direction? Most definitely.

Keep kicking ass!

UD ASAP!

I love your writing style very much! I will read your story no matter the direction because I know it will be eloquently described to perfection!

This latest chapter proves what I keep saying over and over - YOU ARE AN AMAZING/BRILLANT WRITER!

Marissa and Krystal sharing and talking over lunch in the park were very special and much needed for their relationship to grow. Marissa didn't need to say much - just simply listen and open her heart. "There's Krystal's voice again, attempting to draw Marissa further out, and so food is left behind in a quest to satisfy a deeper hunger, to satisfy this appetite for disclosure." AMAZING!

As Krystal's words and touch starts to tug at Marissa's heart and breakthrough her walls that she had built over the years... "It feels like someone trying to be there for her and Marissa doesn't want to shove another person away – like I am prone to do – so she tells her muscles to relax and accept." PRICELESS!

This was a chapter that needed to be included in this amazing story, so thank you for adding the MOM/DAUGHTER chapter.

LOVE THIS STORY!

:)

Beautiful. What a perfect mother daughter moment!:)

Your descriptions are always so BEAUTIFUL!

The way you describe the inner thoughts of Bianca and Marissa is simply SPECTACULAR! "And Bianca silently curses the pieces of her soul that insist on holding out forever with endless hope". (AMAZING)

Seriously, your writing is off the charts. As I read each of your updates I’m astonished at the level of your creative mind..."doesn't want to involve herself in this person's life any more than she must, doesn't want to learn secrets and grow closer and discover that she has already fallen right as the ground slams into her bones". WOW!

No more need to be said except...

PERFECT!

:)

"She almost feels like some other woman again, untethered and drifting into Marissa's lips and into Marissa's hands and into a moment of bliss quite unlike any other."

"Marissa's voice is low, an undercurrent in a sea of other sounds, but it is still hard and it is still hurt and Bianca doesn't want any of this."

"...it feels like years ago that Bianca rattled out an orgasm into Marissa's mouth and something formed between them while they were not looking."

-Aways with the elegant cascade of language.

Just go for it Bianca you know she'll make you happy!

Great UD.

:)