Love it.

The ending is amazing! Pure epicness.

That was really, really good. Like, really good. I didn't see the Eames/Lee dream/court thing coming at all and it's a really clever, unique idea. The characters all seemed spot-on too. I am a bit cross with Arthur and Eames, however -just like Ariadhe - although i'm sure I will come to forgive them too...in time. And after I make them work for it. I really enjoyed your story and hope you write another inception one soon!

It's over? Already? :O

YAY! Time for mushy Arthur! :D :D

An unexpected twist leaves us hanging to wait for more. I really think it is brilliant

I think Arthur's going to be a dead man when Ariadne realizes what he did, lol

Ohhhhh….it's a dream….. THOSE JERKS! thats so mean putting her through all that for some stupid test. But i'm still super proud of her for not cracking under the pressure. great writing by the way, can't wait for the next chapter :)

Wow, so that was a test? Poor Ariadne, having to go through that. She's gonna be so angry! I am guessing Lee was really Eames in disguise? Great writing, I am enjoying this. Thanks! :-)

Good girl. I'm glad she didn't turn them in. it makes her a good guy.

When I was reading it while doing beta work, I whished she would be bailed out by her comrades. Then I wanted her to turn them in and then I wished her to remain silent. You write really great.

Thank god - I had a feeling she was going to betray them, so glad she isn't. Lee's a slimy git isn't he? Looking forward to reading more!

.. Poor Ariadne. Sniff.

This seems like it's going to be really good. It's a completely original idea and you write really well - a rather wonderful combination. I feel really sorry for Ariadne. Eagerly looking forward to reading more - Ellen

Of course, she'll never turn them in.

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Right?