Well then, first I read the reviews and then I read the first and latest chapters of this. The reviewers whom your more poorly educated fans felt were doing you a disservice, were actually trying to help you. It would seem that you don't wish to show any respect to your fans judging from your constant failure to use any of the many readily available writing aids such as spell and grammar check to improve your writing. As you have not bothered to learn to use the English language in a coherent manner in the nine years since you began writing this, then I cannot be bothered to read any more of it. I wish you well. NNL

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Nice, nice i'll give u tht for a good attempt. I've been on FB trying this out with my friend and if u want to male it better u go in detail. And trust me I KNOW what I'm doing when it comes to detail, challenge ACCEPTED

Alright, that lucky you guy is really pis*ing me off. How dare he say u have a learning dissabatly. My friend is disslectic. Wat he put was just f*cking insulting and offences. If he's really driving u mad tell him wat u think about him and put it straight. U don't want this story taken down I mean the criticism centipedegirl got we r ignoring so do the same. If this guy reviews again and gives u criticism just tell him not to read the story put it to him straight cause really, not only is he pushing ur buttons but mine aswell and I only go so far before I explode and someone dies hahaha.

Keep up the work. I can read it. U can read it. They can read it. So there's nothing wrong with it. Grammar a bit but hey I have sh*t grammar to so wat.

Centipedegirl friend

My pleasure. Thx for replying anyways I wouldn't say ur friends a pev. U think wat u put is peve u want to read basses in the blood now that's a lot of mating.
If u want to c how bad r grammar and spelling is read centipedegirl stories one of them is a Jeepers creepers version I find tht funny and good and the others r on avp life follows after death. Read them and c wat u think.
We fight are own battles when it comes to it so we know wat to do I'm on ur side.
From centipedegirl friend

Yh I know how she feels. People can be bitch's with fanfic stories my friend centipedegirl is writing a story and she of critisum so I deal with them.
English is my first language, but were no good at grammer or spelling but we try the best we can. It's true u didn't force people to read this story it was their choice so ignore them and carry on with what u like doing. It's your choice if u want to change this story so don't let them change it for u.
Want some advice tell them to grow the fu*k up and stop acting like ur parents.

From centipedegirl friend (spidergirl)

I personally very much enjoy this story! And cetanukawm I hate seeing the bad comments ur getting due to this story, all of those out there that aren't giving u respect and are leaving rude comments I have one thing to say to you, stop reading this story! If u think its so bad then leave the story and go find something u like! Yes this person's grammar isn't the best but trust me NO one's is perfect, at least cetanukawm has the guts to keep writing so leave this person to do what he/she loves to do, write! So buzz off haters ain't nobody got time for u;)

When u told the person who wrote TO THE STARTS AND BACK and u told her to put question marks so no one gets confused

To late I got confused

Do another chapter for this story its good

please write more

Thirteen Chapters and no progress in your writing. Really? I would ask if it can get any better, but obviously it can't. Simply pathetic.

You should listen to the ones who are trying to help you, and ignore the false praise that some give you (because they don't know shit about writing either).

WOW..- Whoa...

What is the writing app called?

Listen, this isn't going to be a stellar review, so just stick i out. I get that English isn't your first language and all, but the amount of errors and mistakes in this story is just appalling, Yes, we are only human, but you have an obligation to go over and fix these errors before posting your work. Really, I did not enjoy this at all. If you wrote this on Microsoft Word, or any other word processor for that matter, you have a spell checker and grammar checker readily available. If not, there are websites that can do that for you,

I could pick apart this story left and right, but I don't have ime. I suggest that you two find yourselves a good Beta reader that really knows this area of writing, and can readily help you when you need it. If not, rewrite this story, and update the chapters via the Document Manager in the Publish section of your Account.

I want to see you two succeed, and this story has potential, but it needs major revisions, badly. I wish you two the best.

Predy96

GGGAAAHHHHH AWESOMENESS! I really really can't wait to read the next chappy! :D

First of all, only 2 proper reviews, wha?
Second, you need to work on spelling and grammar. Badly.

I almost asked if English was your first language, that explains a lot actually. My point is how you two get so offended when people offer constructive criticism, something that should help at least one of get better at writing. I didn't ask you those questions to 'hate' on you. It's clear that neither of you want to improve.

I had excellent grades in school, I earn a nice salary, my family is well fed, and here is a little secret: most people do that everyday not just you. Everyone has some type of struggle nowadays, it's part if life. As far as writing I can do that, too. What would you like?

This is fanfiction I can read and review whatever I want. If you don't want people to give you concrit, then take it down. Or grow a tougher patch of skin and accept the fact that some will not lie about this story being 'awesome' or 'good'.

I don't care about you calling me a bitch or an ass if it makes you feel better. Feel better?

Now, I will apologize for asking if you two were special needs, or had a learning disability. That came across as hurtful which wasn't my intention.

Let me reiterate, if you don't want criticism don't post. It's not just "back spelling" as you called it, it is way more.

Don't apologize for being mean...; )

To Kawm and Cetanu,
When you feel sad, think all the good thing that brings a smile to your face, laugher in your voice and brings cheers to your heart
Look for the ones that care, love unconditional and don't care if anyone had problems or not
Like Grandma always said, " No words can break my bones! Just smile at them and say I Love you. That will leave them confuess."
So don't let them get to you, think of trees that need to be cut down to clear a path and use what ever lefts to make a bridge and skip and hop over the bridge like a child enjoy the sunny day without no worries.
Don't Worry, Be Happy! :)

i hope it cheers you up and ur fine.
Sincerely, ArtsAreFun(DeviantArt)