Wow can’t believe you wrote a fic based on my fave movie! Thx

I'd like to take a note for chapter 17, based on my own experience.

Sweeping someone off their feet is a real thing. What the writer wrote in this chapter is very real. You think days is too soon especially because it compares to years? Trust me, it's not. Maybe it sounds like 'oh this is just fic' and probably in one or two movies. Nope, I can assure you it's damn real.

Relationship is not merely based on hard work. She wanted cold water, you worked so hard to fan the water. Someone came along and brought ice cubes. Swept her off her feet.

To me, love is an act of offering. Make sure what you have meets their needs. No it's not just material. It's the things nobody can explain but I assure you, you'll know.

Good job like this story x

Poor JJ, I was so hoping for another reaction

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A sweet ending :). I really enjoyed this story:)

Dangnabbit l need a cold shower. And of course l just had to read this in my lunch break at work ;). Amazing :)

Didn't expect that thought it would be earlier in the water :) We have lift off...kinda ;)

You have opened up a whole world of possibilities with only Emily working for the FBI. How would JJ react to Emily getting hurt? What would Emily do if JJ were in danger?
So cool :)

Loved this

Thanks for this story

I really enjoyed reading this story! It was a wonderful roller coaster ride and I look forward to reading more of your stories. I hope you are doing well and are enjoying your summer/fall.

Great story - totally enjoyed it. Thanks a lot for sharing and finishing it!

This was lovely.

I love, love, love, love this story! This was a very beautiful and unique story. I enjoy reading and rereading this story! I hope you are doing well ]