Kewl! Odd, but kewl. I like it.

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Deathy

Absolutely wonderful. A beautiful piece of work. Hope to see you at work soon.

Poor Chucky...

~ L _~

WOOOOOOO! We have a winnah!

DeGonGin, thank you, you've finally got the the about Auron, the thing that I've been trying to hint at for a long time. But don't tell anyone. I still want to surprise everyone else who reads it.

As promised, I will put your name into the story. Only question; you want your real name, or your fanfiction author name? Send a review my way, okay?

Jeez. I'm sorry about the writer's block. I hate it when that happens.

Your fanfic is wonderful. Please, for the love of all that is Final Fantasy, write MOOOOORE!

Yayness! Happyhappy! _

Good chapter. I know how you feel with writers block. Good luck getting out of it.

You know, I worked on that silly chocobo race for what seemed like forever. I wish to Yevon I could have bought a bag of feed from Rin and done this!

Tidus... that sneaky scamp. LOL

Hmm...

*sets a big rock to trip over in the middle of the course, slinks off whistling innocently*

Ooo. Poor chucky. with Auron's luck, he'll be squashed or something.

Awesome chapter. I especially loved the conversation between Auron and Kimahri. You stayed very true to the characters.

weee... this was a fun chapter. I enjoyed the way you handled the interaction between the characters. Mahvelus dahling.

Sorry it's taken so long to post on this chapter. A nice job with the kata. However, my favorite part has to be Wakka. *lol*

Good job. Oh, and about that correction on the medical part; it was accurate enough not to change it. The only parts I would change are Yuna pouring Auron's sake (or whatnot) into the disinfectant- the substances are the same basic chemical compound, but the alcohol safe for drinking is more dillute, and usually has a bunch of additives that could serve to irritate human tissues. It does destroy one's liver, after all... Also, the death spell would only be necessary to stop more blood flowing into the wound rather than holding off pain, though it did fit in well with the Auron-torture motif you had going for the chapter.

~ L