This was intense but good. Thanks for the read :)

what happened to your writing style?! i feel after the first chapter you just stopped trying. there's no more different paragraphs when another person is talking, no proper punctuation and such. and your writing has gone down hill after chapter one. chapter one was absolutely amazing and what brought me in to your story but after the third chapter i stopped because the writing is so bad :( why?! you got a good story line going here.

So, sad... I'm practically sobbing over here...

I know this review is really late and all. But I screamed at my computer screen for twenty minutes while crying like a baby. This story was to short lived and I loved every moment of it until you killed them. I feel so betrayed, even as a wonderful work of fiction I feel like my heart will never trust a summary again.

oh so sad

I was crying. It is to sad to end. But it is a great story. But I asked the story not to do that to my again.

But the happy part is, they are all together now Godric,Alex and Ariana.

-Steffi

I don't like that Alex is dead, you shouldn't have done that.

I'll continue reading now, hopefull you will not do this again. I can not handle it again. But otherwise great story.

-Steffi

Men... Amazing story. I cried a lot.

I feel sorry for Godric though, I mean, in this site I could count on my one hand how many fics of him I have read in which he hadn't been killed on the roof. But in this story I can kind of get where he is coming from. It's that constant grief yet even if his daughter had died he shouldn't give up living because his wife is still alive. What's the point in killing himself if the woman he loves is still alive? That's just how I feel.

The person or vampire I feel sorry for the most is Eric. He had to witness 3 deaths: his maker, niece and the only woman he'd loved. Eric always find himself interested in a woman who's already attached to someone. Instead of Bill it's Godric this time. In this story though, it must have been a bitch loving a woman secretly for almost a thousand years.

Good chapter. Still made me cry though lol

Omg im crying so hard :( Update again soon.

Fucking amazing!

so they have a child, she sounds precious! ariana and godric shoudl get married now lol

i love this story and im wondering when eric comes in?

Great chapter! Please have eric in the next one i want to see how he reacts to alex. I want to see him kind of in a big brother role. It would be cute seeing as hes so stoic all the time

Gah! I've got whiplash! In a good way.

we'[re getting closer to the present! im glad that they are together again but this vamp michael killed her sister and now her niece is without parents...so sad!

keep em coming