| Reviews for First Place and Kiss |
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   snowbafeld chapter 1 . 7/16/2018 I love this fanfic! its so well written! |
| Eve chapter 1 . 7/16/2018 I loved this story this is the best shipping in pokemon and the story writing was amazing! |
| Hollee chapter 1 . 12/11/2016 Amazeballs |
| PrincessLuxray15 chapter 1 . 12/27/2015 it was awesome but it kinda was intense when they kissed. |
| Jenny chapter 1 . 1/31/2015 Who would of thought? |
| ForeverLoyalPenguin chapter 1 . 12/20/2014 SO SWEET! I LUV THIS SO MUCH :D |
| cats12812 chapter 1 . 6/1/2013 I find a lot of my music from videos on Youtube |
| Mage of Hope chapter 1 . 1/20/2012 So cute! |
| alexandryte chapter 1 . 9/6/2011 I totally don't need any explanations for this story. I seriously loved the fluff. It was sooooooo cute. That's probably one of the best oneshots I've read (I swear). I'm glad got the nerve to kiss Dawn... and kinda ask her to be his GF (in a way without words hehehe). Good job. See ya!(I'm off to bed right now) |
| Amulet Misty chapter 1 . 8/27/2011 That was really cute x3 I did spot one mistake though: '"Why not?" he said, taking her hand in both of hers.' I think you meant 'in both of his'. Yay for watching Penguinshipping AMVs to get music! Haha I have to admit half the songs I like I found out from AMVs. |
| Strands of Ivy and Sakura chapter 1 . 8/23/2011 *Mouth drops a considerable amount* Omy goodness!1 you can write shojo! |
| turle chapter 1 . 8/23/2011 its... short but kinda good. |
| Puppypaws4 chapter 1 . 8/22/2011 Fluffy! I loves me the fluff and this story, good job! |
| DarknessPwns0.o chapter 1 . 8/22/2011 awesome job (like usual) sooo cute but wat is penguinshipping? cuz im pretty sure this story doesnt involve penguins js |
