| Reviews for A little payback |
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jenuuchi chapter 2 . 2/22/2014 MAKE A THREESOME. MAKE A THREESOME. DO ITTTTT |
Guest chapter 2 . 12/15/2013 Another chapter please! And it should be 1869 since he's the one with frickin handcuffs |
Shana-Fujioka chapter 2 . 12/14/2013 I already wrote a review as a guest yesterday, so I won't write the same again. I was the one with the "blood licking", I even had the same name I think. But just because of this chapter I won't stop following you, because I love all the other stories I've read so far. . I'm looking forward to your next story or the next chapters. :3 |
Shana-Fujioka chapter 1 . 12/14/2013 This sequel of "unexpected reversal" was amazing like the other chapter. The character of Mukuro is displayed so well! . I already wrote a review yesterday, but I was still a guest back then, that's why I write to you again. I don't exactly remember what I wrote, but I surely said, that I love it. I wish you continue to write amazing fanfics like these. :3 |
ShanaFujioka chapter 2 . 12/13/2013 I don't really know, if I like this chapter (I loved the 1st and 2nd chapter). That's because the content was ok and the blood in itself didn't really disturb me, but what did, was Kyoya licking the blood. It's just, that I really find it disgusting when someone is licking another ones blood (I don't mind, if it's your own or if the other person is a vampire). :) I hope for a new chapter and I'd really like to see the revenge of Kyoya on Mukuro. I can't really imagine either of them as bottom, so a suggestion of me is: At first Kyoya is the top and after he comes inside, Mukuro will do something like... push him away and take the top next with a sentence like "I like to top better than getting laid.". So both of them will be bottom and top. . But you don't have to write that, even if I'd like to read it. I'm looking forward to your next chapter! :3 |
ShanaFujioka chapter 1 . 12/13/2013 As amazing as the other chapter! I loved it! I like Tsuna as top and as bottom, and because my imagination is "trained" (I read so much), I can almost see what is happening as if I'm standing next to the bed. . I just decided to sign up, so I can follow you and I'm looking forward to your next chapter. :3 |
Whatamu chapter 2 . 11/12/2013 mukuro should be top! |
Saaniser chapter 2 . 10/1/2013 Shh.. don't tell anybody that I reviews..! Anyways..! *whisper whisper* 182769 threesome would be awesome...! |
RaVeN-HaIrEd-AnGeL 27 chapter 2 . 8/24/2013 UKE KYO-CHAN ! ! ! |
ERROR 404 Porn Not Found chapter 2 . 7/22/2013 Aaaaw... I'm trully sorry to review in this chapter.. Tehe #Slapped . poor Tsuna... Hibari sure is protective, yet Tsuna is unaware with the perverted pineapple herbicore... But, I think HibaTsu is pretty lovey dovey... Tehe... Thanks 4 the fic |
FallenxLinkin chapter 2 . 3/19/2013 A little sad at the thought of Mukuro touching Tsuna when he already belong to Hibari but nonetheless a great sequel ;) |
KrixLight chapter 2 . 5/12/2012 how cute! |
BLEAH-IM-EVIL-STAR chapter 1 . 4/30/2012 a totally awesome storyXD |
CrazyForEvilCookies chapter 2 . 2/1/2012 Wow, I think I'm going to die from nosebleeding. XDD lol I really liked this! It's amazing! I think a 182769 would be great *Tries to not die from bloodloss* |
connerng chapter 1 . 1/24/2012 YOU WRITE, IF YOU CALL THIS WRITING, LIKE AN OLD LADY. KNIT! KNIT! KNIT! |