That was a touching chapter, well written. I'm feeling so sad for Jacob.

Brilliant story!

This was fucking amazing, and I loved every second of it.

Bella reads childish in this chapter... I don't see a mature enough woman that can make the decisions she has to make.

No! Almost kill, meet so they notice, even change them but not kill mike and jess! Then she couldn’t have stayed in area I hope it gets better

MOTHER HUGGER THIS IS AMAZING AND IMMA COME BACK LATER AND ACTUALLY WRITE A LONG POST BC ITS LIKE 1 AM WHERE I AM BUT THIS WAS SUPER SUPER GOOD AND EVERYTHING I WANTED OUT OF BREAKING DAWN - BELLA STRUGGLING , AN ACTUAL FIGHT , NO CREEPY BABY , BELLA HAS TO GIVE UP HER PARENTS, I LOV ALL OF THIS GOOD JOB YOU LOVELY HUMAN BEING

so far so good

I will read no more of this story! Bella would NOT kill a human! I understand it is your story. Her love of all and kindness of heart would have followed her into her new life.

This was so well written. I loved how Emmet, Rosalie and Tanya got hurt so seriously, but gets better, slowly. It's enough drama and gave the entire fight the credibility it needed.
I also loved how the fight actually was a fight, and how the Vulturi was eradicated. Thanks :D

I kinda miss someone pointing out that Edwards WANTS to be damned. I mean, so one religion might exempt him from damnation, but then he'd ready to find another that won't...

Emmett telling Bella to stop reading *killed me. I laughed so hard that I'm sore. Really enjoyed this story!

I love her struggles! Sounds bad but it's true. Probably my favourite twilight fanfic. Lovely writing. Better than the book.

I am not a person who thinks like a critic or teacher or some learned scholar. I am a reader who knows what she likes to read and as much as I love S.M. stories.I have found your version as compelling and rich as her original.I have also read the outtake and other 2 stories and loved them. All were posted a while ago though I see nothing else by you. I hope that doesn't mean you are done as I would love to read more of your fiction.

Oh man, the ending kind of sucked, what with the battle and all, but holy-fing mackerel?! You managed to find the whole blood-transfusion thing too, good trick!

Congratulations sir, I FINALLY finished this, and overall? It was well worth it! :-)

Now I see the pebble in my shoe about your story. Even though you made bella marry edward, you made jacob her hero.