Good job but for the first few chapters Dimitri just keeps going on and on and on about rose which seems a little overdone and out of character. He isn't the kind of guy to just fall in love with a picture of some girl and then dream about her and all that when he hasn't even met her. It felt uncomfortable. Nonetheless, good try

Too bed Dimitri's Birth to Badass isn't finished. I would love to see it done.

I really liked this story. I loved it being so short and complete. Thank you for writing it.

I love how you brought in they were attending high school but living on the college campus. I do believe that Lissa used compulsion to make it seem logical for them to live wherever they ended up. That's how they got enrolled in school and were able to attend classes.

I'm really enjoying reading about Dimitri's journey to finding the girls. Good job so far.

This is one of the most loving and revealing DPOV I have read. Fantastic job !

Loved it!

That was the worst ending u could have ever done
It really sucked

This is so flippen awssome lovin it tanx

That was really sweet little creepy with Dimitri but hey it all worked out. I enjoyed reading. Epilogue was adorable as well.

I love this! U are a great writer! Thanks

that was really good and i thought it was good to add the strigoi you should do like way more of these but i think in the begining you could have done less information like you could have just gotten straight to the point like ok he thought she was stunning and then he set out to find her because you went on for like ages! no offence

This is one of my favorite stories on the site. It's truly excellent.

God I love this. Excellent, truly excellent. Ten thumbs up.

this is so amazing!