That was amazing! I love your writing style and the structure! Well done!

Wow, Beyond. This is amazing

Aww the story was really good but I don't understand how is it that when L visited B, L seemed very confident and then later in the story he is all shy? I prefer the shy L he is soo cute, and most of the story seemed to be about AxB. But this is defenately my first BxL fanfiction I read so far :) waiting for new chapter! !

It seems that you've stopped writing on here...? That's too bad. Or maybe I'm way off, and that would be amazing. :D Anyway, I read Porcelain Fists and this one, and they're both really good. You're a very talented writer. This story is haunting, addictive. And it tells stories from Beyond's past, which is something that I really love. If you don't plan on continuing this, then...that's too bad. I really would like to see this continued. If you are, then I'll be waiting for it to be released. :)

I've very much enjoyed this story. It is captivating, haunting, and addictive. Please continue your work!

I've read previous part and can tell that your writing and characterisation is improved.
I'm huge fan of B/L pairing and have read many fics with this pairing and I like your B and L very much.
I'm surprised that L didn't even think of "hushing" up B attack to doctor. If L wore jumper and socks just because B asked him to, I think L would do anything B would ask him.

I would love it if you continued this. That would be absolutely amazing. This is absolutely amazing. Please let there be more. O:

please continue! omg! such a good story! _

The only word I can say is Awesome, loved it!

THat;s amazing! Please write more xD Woah that stuff about Beyond is really interesting I love this story!

oh please conitnue! i'll love you forever!

Please write more! Please! I'll love you forever and give you reviews out the wazoo! I love the story so so much~! The style was niceand you made the pace of the storty quite managaable and slow unike others who rush far too much. I greatly enjoyed this piece and Porcelain Fists. Please write more please!

Me again! I think you should most definetely write more to this, because I think I'm addicted. This is just as good, if not better than the first one. Please keep writing this!

Wow, just wow. I wasn't expecting a sequal to Porcelain Fists, and I randomly see this. I was like 'Yaaaay!'. Please continue this. It's awesome!

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! A! AxB! ByondxL! KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!