I was laughing so hard at the end. Great job!

Poor Fred the rock! ;A;

I didn't like it because I felt you relied too much on dialogue and ALL CAPS. Try describing actions more. Body language.

Don't worry... many fics have this issue.

Loved it because it's a laugh to read, as well as short and cute :D

Hahahahahaha that was too funny and too cute!

like it? more like loved it! the best part was when he pulled the tranquilizer gun out of no were... I wiah I could do that... anyway hilarious story XD