Before Shaun could reply Cory heard, "Cory Monteith, get your butt to this car and help me get your daughters out of the car. Your spawn is causing it to be difficult to do much of anything. Hi Shaun!"
Hahahahahahahaha!

This was amazing! Please tell us you have written/writing a sequel, it's so good :)

I think the story was awesome it only took me like 3 days to read it becuz i was so addicted to it but i also had to wait until i got out of school to get to my phone. It was pretty awesome i wish there was more

Congrats! I really enjoyed your fanfic. I started reading it last night in my cellphone 'cause I couldn't sleep, I get to read the first 15 chapters (I stayed awake 'till 3AM just to continue reading) and this morning when I wake up and turned my computer on I thought I had to find the same fic in the computer so I could read it better, and now I've just finished it (and I have to say finishing it made me feel a bit empty) so I just wanted to tell you how much I loved the story, actually you inspired me to write something (I promise it won't have anything to do with this story, I don't like making copies of the same thing, what I mean is that you give me back the joy of writing monchele) so that's it, I loved the fic, I loved the story, and I think you're a truly amazing writer, I think you've got an obvious talent and that you'll go far. The only thing I found a bit strange was that sometimes in the dialogues you put too many periods, and that stops the dialogue too much, and also sometimes you go on the oposite and even if you put periods and everything you put a lot of continued dialogue and despite the points it seems a bit like the character isn't breathing hahahaha but that's just... you know, my opinion, anything really important. Like I said before, congrats!

Awesome :-) :-) :-)

You write the best monchele and finchel stories EVER

Aww that was cute... Olivia is so funny! Now i want a kid like her

SOOOOO GOOD! OMGGG!

OMG! I loved this it was amazing! Probably the best story I have ever read!

Just found this old story and read it and loved it

I love your story sooo much!

I am loving this story! Only up to Chapter 9 and have to go to work now but I am so coming straight back to this when I get home. I have to finish it before I go to bed tonight :)

I am home sick today, so I read this whole story in bed. Let me tell you simply, I LOVED IT! Can this please happen? I will DIE! Beautifuly written, believable, and just PERFECT! Fed my Monchele obsession lol. Xoxo B

This was an amazing story!

You are a talented writer who really takes the time to get to know your characters and what they are going through and that is a rare but welcomed trait.

I hope you continue your writing for a long time to come :)

-Wish

loved this story