this is soo pretty. I loved it. the last line stayed with me for hours.

Yeah..unrequited love does hurt...excluding the whole Draco wanting Harry to be in pain and stuff I can relate...so...good job on this one shot!

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Omg, that is so so so sad...

Nicely written.

mmmm. ihana ficci. sellainen sekavan unenomainen tunnelma. äh. vaikea selittää. mutta sä olet uskomaton kirjoittaja. muuten. miksei PHFF näy? vai onko se vaan mun koneen syy. no. eio voi mitään.. :)

To hate him as much as he loved him is so acurate of Draco. I can see that. Makes me want to scream at Harry; "Just look at him! Even if it's only to glare, just acknowlege him!" Stupid clueless boy.

OOOO! THIS IS so interesting! PLESASE update soon! It's not the end is it? It doesn't sound like the end! MORE!

Another one, eh? You are a very good writer. I truly like the angst-ridden ideas you come up with. Compliments to the muse!

Yes unrequited love is a bitch isn't she. I liked it and felt bad for Draco though it was kind of dark as well, but in a good way. *grin*

very interesting. Nice!

OHHH that was lovely continue on.

Whoa, whoa, whoa.. H/D slash angst, there ain't nothing better. This kicks! Add more, add more!

Writing like this makes me wish I could write slash.. woohoo, keep going, I'll be waiting!

Wow! That was good!

Haunting, compelling, and thought-provoking... Utterly and beautifully gothic... :) ~

one word. wow.

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It had to be a dream. There are no windows in the Slytherin dorms.

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that line really got me. it was truly amazing! it was deep! keep up the good work!