I loved this story. It was wonderful. I found this due to molly2012 over on A03 and am so glad I did. Thanks so much for sharing. I'm off to read some more of your stories shortly

Simply brilliant! Loved it! More please!

This is excellent! So HOT!

That was... Hot. Very hot. ;)

not sure there's much else to be said really... :P

I'd be interested in seeing you write a Ziva/Jenny fic, where Jibbs was mentioned and alluded to... It would be an interesting sort of explanation I think... :P

Wow, I'm so glad that you recommended this one to me. I decided to go with "heat" first...well, because that was what I was in the mood for... ;). That was more like an inferno! The necklace part was so sweet...and so her.

Extremely well written. Good dialog. Very hot.

I've compared this to the first offering of yours that I read last week. You've come a long way as a writer. This flowed much more smoothly and comfortably, painting pictures in my mind. Truthfully, it is beyond anything I would have read even a month ago, but your style has really captured my attention...so I guess I'm along for the ride regardless of who you choose to pair up - although there are probably limitations to that. *smile*

Good job!

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i really like it... i would love more chapter...

I loved this story, the emotional ending fit the pairing perfectly. One day I wish I could write half as great as u.

The Dalish

Great story, and great ending! you should definitely do a sequel!

Wow this is a really good chapter, it was sweet AND "hot"! lol I really like the concept of the story, how Jenny goes to Israel for a mission and her and Ziva end up having the hot's for each other and they get together.

Oh I love this! I really like the launguage you are using. So very fitting of these two. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Love the ending! We all know how much that pendant means to our Z. It's touching that she would let Jenny have it. :)

Wow... just wow. I hadn't even thought of Jiva that much until now. I've read one other story that got me interested, but this was... wow.

(My brain has turned to mush! Look at what you've done to me!)

It's an awesome start! I love the silent heat that passes between the two women! Well done.

Another superbly written chapter and a beautiful ending... realistic, given how important their careers are to both women, but with a determination not to lose this new found emotional connection between them. You've always had a way of conveying Ziva's sometimes raw vulnerability and how she tries to guard herself against any hurt. Loved the gift of the necklace.

Forgot to mention that I love your chapter titles... you have a real knack with them, hun!