That was quite a story. Was very surprised with most of the ending, starting with things at The Citadel. Just a lot of bad stuff being thrown left and right. But still...I enjoyed MV quite a bit!

OK, before I continue reading, I really need to know why you blur our your OC's name and just leave 'Art.' It seems kind of unnecessary to me, and it's all that funny in my opinion, if that's what you're going for. Why not just give him a name?

Also, would his blurred out name happen to be Arthur Pendragon?

Stan Shunpike: (On the Knight Bus with Harry, who is looking around) Come on, come on, move on! (Clears throat, gives Harry a ticket, and knocks on the window next door) Take her away, Ern.
Shrunken Head: (Next door) Yeah! Take it away, Ernie! It's going to be a bumpy ride!
(Ernie wakes and starts up the Knight Bus and drives it quite quickly while things slide back and forth)
Shrunken Head: Ha Ha Ha Ha!
Stan Shunpike: (To Harry) What did you say your name was again?
Harry: I didn't!
Stan Shunpike: Well, whereabouts are you headin'?
Harry: The Leaky Cauldron. That's in London.
Stan Shunpike: Did ya hear that, Ern? The Leaky Cauldron. That's in London.
(Laughs)
Shrunken Head: Ah, the Leaky Cauldron! Hey, if you have the pea soup, make sure you eat it before it eats you!
(Laughs)
Harry: But the Muggles! Can't they see us?
Stan Shunpike: Muggles? They don't see nothing, do they?
Shrunken Head: No, but if you jab them with a fork they feel it! (Laughs) Ernie, little old lady at twelve o'clock! (Bus stops for old lady to cross, while Harry smashes into the window) Ten... Nine... Eight... Seven... Six... Five... Four... Three... Three and a half... Two... One and three quarters, yes!
(Little old lady finally passes and bus moves on)

(Everyone aboard the Heart of Gold has been turned into yarn dolls)
Zaphod: Wow...is this gonna happen every time we...we hit that button?
Trillian: Very probably, yes.
(Arthur stumbles onto the bridge)
Marvin: Ah, I think the Earthman's about to be sick.
Zaphod: Whoa, whoa, do it in the trash can, ape man! This ship's brand new!
(Arthur vomits colored yarn into the can)
Ford: Oh, dear.
Zaphod: Oh, come on!
Trillian: We have normality.
Arthur: [now normal, pulling a strand of yarn from his mouth] Did it work, are we there?

YAY! WREX IS BACK ONBOARD THE NORMANDY SR2 AND NOT AS A GUEST BUT A SQUADMATE!

Legion is a G

And the killing continues.

Well it really seems like you just kill people by this point. I undertoood why you killed thane Yes. It was part of the original story, and it gave Art some character development. But I see no reason at this point. You simply kill people because you said you would. Thats a bad aspect of the story in my eyes.

Keeping the country bumpkin qnd getting rid of most of the good crew, if at times with good reason.
Sigh...

Ok...I did so not expect that... You actually Thane. Why him?
Can't see a point when unimportant and uninspiring people like and similar live...
Ah well...

Honestly, the amount of idiot ball you are using here is shutting down any suspension of disbelief.
Why the heck would he carry orange if he intended to get captured.

Moron.

Time for a shared dram or two, right now.
Intense chapter.

Aside from a few , rocked.

Stupid yet fun ending...
And wow, poor slob of a quarian.
Your Heckington on the voice actress IS a bit much, just saying.

So far you are not doing the prophecy part well, but then again, it is hard to manage that.