| Reviews for Family portrait |
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   aninom chapter 10 . 7/16 It's a good story! I really liked it:) |
| Dragodina chapter 9 . 10/9/2011 Hey there Fleppy! Great last and new chapters! You did an ace work - as always! Curios for what's going to come! Looking forward to new updates! For now, many lovely greetings, your fleppicted Dragodina ;) |
| TessTrueHeart chapter 6 . 9/16/2011 Great update, good job on the scene set up and good story, lookinbg forward to more. |
| TessTrueHeart chapter 5 . 9/12/2011 Great update, love the little scene setter perfect! |
| TessTrueHeart chapter 4 . 9/6/2011 Good Update, One suggestion, when you start a new chapter set the room for us readers with who is there and talking before you start the dialog, usually a sentence is all you need. Other than that Great job |
| Dragodina chapter 3 . 8/29/2011 Fabulous third chapter of this story! Really enjoyed reading it very much! All the slight bickering moments between Sara and Sofia. Hilarious! Add a playful Greggo and the new character Jules and you have a pretty interesting group! Great update! Thank you for that! Can't wait to see more of this story! I'm assuming there is still more to come with the killer and our lovely ladies! Please, soccer god, have mercy with us! Many lovely greetings, your Dragodina - who keeps her fingers crossed ;) |
| Dragodina chapter 2 . 8/29/2011 Hey there grumpy! Or was it smuggy? I can't remember - sieve! So first of all I think its a good idea of you to somehow extend the update-teams and players! Or else we really would have to wait a decade to end the story! And honestly, who wants to wait for more Sara - Sofia stuff? So our Bayern are a good bet for many updates, I hope. So far, I had a suspicion about the OC your coming up with - and Sofia. And what can I say ... I was right ! Even though, I have to admit ... I'm jealous *pouting*. I'm hungry for the next update! Greetings, your Dragodina |
| TessTrueHeart chapter 1 . 8/22/2011 Love this start, great story, I hope your team scores many many goals, along with your two favorite players. looking forward to more |
| Dragodina chapter 1 . 8/21/2011 Hey there busy bee ;D! Woah, your totally outdoing yourself there! Two updates in one day! Cool idea! Uhm ... but what if they don't play the way we expect them to ...? OHHH! I better won't think about that yet ! Well, then I hope for many many scores and goals by our lovely ladies! Will keep my fingers crossed then, too ;)! Maybe that will do the trick! For the start, it was excellent! I'm anxious what is going to happen further! And of course, about the OC you created for Sofia, the now Deputy Chief! Argh, now we have to wait ... why can't they play soccer every day a week ... huh. Lovely greetings, your fleppicted Dragodina ;) |
