Reviews for Karma |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i love that crazy bipolar old man... had me crying cause i was laugh so hard |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...Are you a Supetnatural fan? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry for the late review but yay school and work are over! :):):) so I finally have time to review this incredible part two of the epilogue. WOW! This is what I've been missing. And it's James bottom! You know how I feel about this. Incredible! Your word choice and sentence structures were fluid and easy. It was smooth. I love smooth writing. I hate choppy hard writing. With smut, I want smooth connected writing. Which was what I read here. It was incredible. And James was bottoming?! YAY! Lol. I'm am a dominant Kendall fan even though Dom!James is good too but THIS IS GREAT! Idk but this is as if you wrote this for me. I LOVE YOU! ;) And the expressions and short interjections James made with losing his butt virginity was perfect. I can picture everything happening with his euphoric face and his sexy butt. Lol xD. And is it wrong that I smiled soooohard when Kendall mention cargan having a story on his phone?! Lol. I am soooo sad ... Cargan is my love ... -.-' But the kames was sooo perfect here. I love it :) So sad that this is over. I do love this story but now I can't wait for the continuation of Busboy. That story is the center of my btr heart lol. I can't wait :). And can't wait to talk to you:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was kind of the best thing ever! |
![]() ![]() LOVE your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() looooveed it |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story I love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() woa didn't know Kendall was going to top James?! wat funny story does Carlos have to tell them? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought it was cute and I liked how they joked on the red carpet, but I think I like the Cargan Epilogue better :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ithink I have read this fanfic at least a dozen times and I won't rest until the Kames Epilogue comes out. I love this story so much, I really want to know what happens and you are a really good writer :) |
![]() ![]() Please, please, please, upload the kames epilogue, I really want to know what happens, your stories are soooooo good and I just live this one. Please please please (0,0) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is not fair! This is perfect and yet only 1k of words?! Why do you torment me with perfect smutty cargan with only 1K words! I mean this has everything I wanted: smut, Carlos bashing Logan, Logan's head bashing the dashboard, them on a bed, Logan being a slut, Carlos controlling Logan (god that is sexy and fucking hot!), and the tender moment afterward. Grr! This has everything and yet, you didn't make this into a 10k word chapter?! GRRR! Lol. But this was really sexy and cute. You know why it is sexy, you do know what I LOVE in cargan XD. But the ending was sweet. Carlos didn't want to kiss Logan yet because he want to say everything and that was the cute thing ever and Logan just turns around anyways and kisses him. So cute and sweet ... I'm this picturing them kissing naked in bed XDXD ... -.-' lol. And then someone in the family says they are loud? HAHAHA I would think cargan smut is loud. Not as loud as kames smut but still loud XDXD. Lol. I love the mini epilogue. It was sexy and sweet and cute. Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh so sorry for rushing u I didn't know u r having trouble! Eh?! CARGAN sex in Garcia house they sure r crazy and damn horny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it there relationship ship has had me up and down and I'm just so glad there so happy ahh! I JUST LOVE CARGAN SO MUCH! |