| Reviews for The Right To Be Jealous |
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   blueberrrykisses chapter 20 . 1/12 i literally cant! please update soon! I binged-read the last 4 chapters (is that i word?) and reread the whole story again. Please update soon! |
| StrawberryPolarBear chapter 20 . 11/2/2019 YESSSSS thank you so much for the update, hope you continue to update |
| MarBere123 chapter 20 . 10/3/2019 Wou, I've been waiting so long for this chapter and you didn't disappoint at all! And that end! OMG, I can't wait for the next! Keep it up! |
| rebfan90 chapter 20 . 10/3/2019 great chapter |
| Bloss3m chapter 20 . 10/2/2019 Omg ! Thank you ! Cant wait for the next chapter! |
| Konna chapter 19 . 6/25/2019 Great fic! Where are the other chapters?! Maná is growing up! and atem is not lol. Please keep it up! |
| Bloss3m chapter 19 . 11/18/2018 Love this story and hope you finish it soon 3 |
| monsuno power chapter 19 . 10/20/2018 Wonderful story I love it.I hope that Dartz wont get close to Mana and that Atem will finaly to read you soon. |
| MarBere123 chapter 18 . 4/17/2018 Oh my god, I really love this story. You do not know how long I wait for Mana and Dartz to meet. I want to see Ouji burn before everything in Bakura explodes. |
| StrawberryPolarBear chapter 19 . 3/15/2018 Great chapter as always, I hope you update soon. |
| marvelsanxy chapter 19 . 3/14/2018 Please keep updating |
| SanDra chapter 19 . 3/12/2018 This Story is the best i ever read. Please keep on writing, or your friend. I love it how grown the Characters are. I hope we will have a happy ending after all. |
| EndlessHopeXx chapter 19 . 3/1/2018 Awesome chapter! I just love how atem finally decided to prove his love to Mana! |
| Guest chapter 19 . 3/1/2018 I really love your fanfic. It's one of the best ancient Egypt stories I've read in yugioh. And I like how you wrote Seto. |
| AroggantIgnorant045 chapter 19 . 2/28/2018 UUUGGGGHHHHH I was sooooo excited for this update because I thought mana would FINALLY FINALLY FINALLYYYYY meet dartz and atem would piss over hinself for offering his unreserved support of dartz' quest for his soulmaye only to find he was talkig anout HIS soulmate and uuydvamodkcnskefifhnxwkoryfznnw *sigh Anyway, my disappointment was soon forgotten when i read the whole thing - you really delivered. The tension's jusy enough for us to anticipate more nut at the same time we feel thay you're very conscious of the story's pacing and want to be as thorough with the details as much as possible while the plot is steadily thickening. I believe (HOPEWISHPRAY) the fated meeting will finally happen within the next 2 chapters (PLSPLSPLSPLS) but before that i want to find out how atem will resolve his issues with mana before they fet tangled up with dartz. May i just say atem was very pomptuous and arrogant when he reserved mana a seat next to him, the friggin PHARAOH, in such an important banquet uncaring of its insinuations and mana's feelings but then again, it was obvious it was his desperation winning over his logic. He feels mana slipping from his grasp and he doesnt even know of she prefers it that way and hes too possessive to let it be that way because as much as he wants to hold on to her, he loves her too much to cage her so he just wants her to WANT TO STAY WITH HIM. Which again, you thickened with mana's declaration of wanting to go travel. What woild be interesting is when atem finds out about this and then finds out about dartz and immediately launch into the assumption that travelling for mana would be her hooding dartz over him and theeen hell wld break loose because he already promised dartz to give him his "soulmate". Whew sorry just got carried away. Anywayyyy hope you update sooner! All the best~~ |
