Reviews for Unable
Raina1 chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
No one should have to apologize for telling someone they love them. I'm sorry Yami felt he needed to.
samaurai chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Im confuse. What exactly is going on?
Rinusagitora chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
*crying in corner* This was so damn good but so sad too. I loved it. It made my heart drop and rise at the same time (is that even possible?), a thousand thanks.
ilovemanicures chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
Wow. This was written quite beautifully, I didn't expect this much emotion when I clicked on the link from my email... But wow this was a mind blowing one-shot, thank you so much for sharing! :)
jfjksgfkjsfjsjkfskjefhsjkdfnks chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
OH MY RA I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS FIC!

Leo: ow! Do you mind?

Not right now Leo! I'm trying NOT to sound like a complete fan girl here!

Eep! Seriously, I have been WAITING for something like this! In EVERY fanfic I've read, Yugi forgives Yami WAAAAAAAAAY too easily! And that's just NOT right! I'm sorry, I love to pieces Yami, but you messed up BIG TIME and you deserve some shunning!

But if that wasn't enough of a shocker, YAMI JUST LEFT! he didn't wait for Yugi to giro his room, he whomped out AND LEFT! Gah I need to re read this, I JUST CANT WRAP MY MIND AROUND IT!

BEST ORICHALCOS FIC I HAVE EVER READ! PLEASE WRITE MORE!
Dontgotaclue88 chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Oh wow. This had me in tears. I hope things work out between them. .
dragonlady222 chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Poor both of them. THey have so much to overcome and so little time to do it. I hope Yugi forgives him soon.
Natoya chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
D'aw, this was sad. :( I understand Yugi's feeling though, it would be hard to forgive that kind of betrayal. Awesome fic!
princessharmony23 chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Holy shit! Thhat was just amazingness in less than 2,000 words. I don't know where your plot bunnies came from, but I sure do need some like those. Great one-shot!
Anne Schaeffer chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
That was beautifully bittersweet. Great job! D
Yami's Sweetheart chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Loved it!:) Poor Yami...:( He'll at least be much better whenever Yugi does foregive him though. Great job!:D
Spindlegal chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Finally! Yugi doesn't forgive Yami! I swear people make Yugi a little TOO forgiving sometimes. This was really good, but sad.

Sad because they love each other yet love is something they can't handle at the -ow crap I have a horrible headache- moment.
Beansprout-Ninja chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Wow Cassie. Good job! *claps slowly, still dumbfounded by awesome writing* Can I just say I really wanted to cry? I have no idea why... I guess because this is really angsty. *shrugs* Of course, I love how you managed to fit Puzzleshipping into the canon. (Even though the pairing itself is very canon. ;D) I'd like to say that I am honored to be the first reviewer for this one-shot. In your face, readers! I got here FIRST! *clears throat* Anyways, I can't wait for more! (I'd really like Kokoro to be updated soon... *cough* hint hint *cough* I'll be going now as I have run out of stuff to say.

Hugs and cupcakes! (I got bored of cookies. Do you want a lollipop too? *grins*)

Rika
Angeldrkfire chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
"Depressing shot" lol it's odd, but interesting to read an unforgiving Yugi. Nice job!