I like reading this story! Why the hell isn't it finished! Also damn, didn't expect Neville to be an asshole.

To me, no author should feel the need to apologize for their attempt to bring a little happiness, humor, or sadness, to their readers. Of course that is if what kind of story the author is writing. All I mean is,
that you ,as an author need to be proud of your work and ideas. authors on Fan Fiction are flamed all of the time, to point of saying, to heck with this, and stop writing all together. I understand the need to want to do better, to write better. If I didn't like your story, I would bother to write a review. I would just stop reading it and go to another story. But, when an author is good and his or her story is good, I just want to say, good job, way to go, and thanks for sharing you talent and ideas with us.
So, I like your story, I like your writing style, and thanks,
Ron Pate
Traveler301

I get that Harry doesn't have experience at relationships, but is rather unbelievable that he doesn't even have the academic knowledge about it

If only you had this finished! This was phenomenal story. I love th character development and truly appreciate your insights I tot their personalities.

I LOVE IT! UPDATE!

As usual, everyone but Harry gets away with near-murder or actual murder, while Harry gets punished for the slightest things.

I hope that something happens that starts tearing Ron and Neville to shreds.

Will Harry ever prove Sirius innocence? Why does Neville have the map that rightfully belongs to Harry? What of The Cloak, does Neville have that as well..a Potter heirloom?

I like your story it has a lot of potential and can spin off in so many different directions, I just wish you would continue to write and update your story.

Good job.

You know what? Actually, it is complete. You've made very interesting psychological storry, which does not need a lot of kiss descriptions, how lips were sweet and so on. It is, some what, preposition. Discovery of souls, experiences are much more, than kiss description.

I loved your fanfics.

Ohhhh nice going ! Now harry saw hermione as a woman! Harry fits perfectly with hermione better~

Nd lik d fools givin u good reviews, they don't know shit,it's your story though but u write like you're hurt and wish shit was that easy for you. Too unrealistic, being ridiculed everytime and still is that forgiving, SHIIIIT

All this ,although written well is still rubbish and unrealistic, jst fantasised garbage

I was really into this story but the constant abuse of Luna hurt too much. Though completely understandable in a sense of the setting, the knifing and twisting into her heart just pushed me away. Can't stop seeing images of her killing herself before Harry finally opens his eyes. Maybe that won't happen. Maybe it'll end well for her and I hope it does. The story is actually quite well written, I see the talent our fine author has, but simply due personal demons and the torment of Luna I can't continue on.