| Reviews for Pieces of a Heart |
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bloodedlife94 chapter 2 . 1/8/2017 huh guess he didn't think of preventions of any kind before having sex with usagi.. |
Pouika chapter 34 . 1/26/2015 Thank you very much for this beautiful story ! (sorry i'm french, but i loves reading your story) |
ili777 chapter 33 . 12/10/2014 Okay so here is me proper review, sorry it's late. The story was nice, as well as the side plot of the two OCs. You started sweetly and I really like the way Misaki and Akihiko interacted. Though I don't see why Misaki had the operation before talking about it with Akihiko, it helped the plot, so no problem there. I liked that you made Akihiko not wanting children at first, but once Misaki was pregrant he didn't seemed to mind or be against having them. The time Misaki was kidnapped made me be on edge, mostly because of Yomi. I liked reading the pov of Kage and how he slowly started worrying and caring for Misaki. I never understood why they kidnapped him though, if they didn't want to rape him, sake him, use him in any way, or blackmail Akihiko, what was the point of keeping him in a room all the time? Plus they didnt even know he was Akihiko's lover at first or anything about him pretty much. I was surprised you didn't have Akihiko stay by Misaki's bed in the hospital from the beginning, but that part was written well (especially when Misaki first woke up) and I actually came to like it too. Also you didn't forget about Takahiro's importance to Misaki's life, which is a huge plus, since many forget about him when writing an m-preg fic. I was greatly satisfied by the way Yomi died and laughed when Kage's sister simply pushed Misaki through -what I supose was- the gate to heaven (or the dead). I loved the ending, it was adorable and I was very relieved nothing happened to the babies even with how early they were born. Thanks for writing this :) P.S. see? Nothing's scary about this review ;) |
ili777 chapter 34 . 12/7/2014 That was such a cute and sweet story. Loved the ending. Thanks for writing it :) |
SNKYaoiFan chapter 34 . 7/31/2014 Thank you so much for this great fanfiction. I really enjoyed reading it and I am so happy that kut there are other people who like male pregnancy. Your fanfiction was great because it was romantic, it had action(even though I didn't like the raping part), and it had fluff. Please write more awesome fanfictions. Yours SNK_YaoiFan |
Pandas01 chapter 34 . 3/15/2014 Wow... This story was both evil and beautiful! Love it! |
xazur3x chapter 24 . 10/22/2013 Really, you're so evil.. *giggle* ;) |
Moonlit-Ajisai chapter 34 . 10/13/2013 I loooooooooooooooved it C: this was awesome \(*o*)/ all hale this story XD |
Guest chapter 34 . 8/8/2013 I am an anonomus but ill be honest. I love rape stories but this is by far the best so far. I also like the ending a lot. Most stories like this end with sex but what you did was make it more like reality and didn't end with sex witch is what I loved about this. And again I loved this story and I can't wait for you to write more. |
The02fan chapter 34 . 4/23/2013 Totally luv it! This was like a OMGFANTASICIMGOINGTODIE! This story is sooo beautiful (Sorry for bad english) ;3 |
MinaCathcart chapter 34 . 3/17/2013 That was beautifully written. |
Jannafrancine chapter 34 . 2/21/2013 Great story. |
ccwhittaker7 chapter 34 . 2/21/2013 Omg awesome |
valgal121 chapter 32 . 9/8/2012 i loved how you ended it with a cliff hanger but not one you should write a sequal to it and see how Usagi can handle taking care of the kids? :) you did a great job try to think of yor own story so you can publish it as a book |
Masquerade1470 chapter 2 . 7/9/2012 OH shit! |