Good story but some parts were like pulling teeth ugh! I love that they are FINALLY painstakingly are back together, but honestly my favorite part was the lake with Ami and Zo

I like that you included her mom and dad. Wish she could peek in on her more often than that seems to say. Why not? I’d think they would both love getting the chance to watch her often while still spending time together. Uranus pisses me off so much most of the time...

Lol I like this Endymion too...

Ugh, Diamond, I usually like Sapphire n he seems decent in this too. I’m excited for the next. Girls are prob gonna be pisses but not really his fault she was taken. Ugh, don’t wanna put up with Uranus...

Omg... I Love Justin/Jed! WHACK! best portrayal of him EVER!

I get that it’s rough between them, I with the outer, mostly Uranus, wouldn’t be so harsh. Breaks my heart the shaky state of the girls relationship. I get that Luna can be rough and needed to not draw on but she missed her so much as did the others, I wish the two of them had a better reunion and Luna can sleep by her charge happpy that night. Not guilty and still heartbroken with a million condescending thoughts filling her head when she just missed and worried about her...

Dang how’d they know she’d be ‘there’ ? And it ‘there’ Serena’s family’s house? Still, I guess I get why you didn’t write in her brother but it seems odd with no mention of him...

As hurt as she is, she should be able to feel the mess he is through their link...

Lololol well at least that last part was funny

Good. Is it wrong of me to want a little more pain?

Where’s her brother?...

This might be mean but I hope Rei and Darien get a boulder of guilt

They really should have gone after her, I’m pissed...

AMAZING story! I thank you for sharing your creativity with us and I look forward to reading your other stories

Reread this tons of times and still, it brings me joy whenever i do! I really really love this fic! Thank you for writing and sharing it! I hope you are doing well.