I really liked this story. The Goblin King is on his best sexy behaviour, and Sarah's portrayal is age appropriate. The smouldering mutual attraction pervades their interactions, again, true to the tale. Your writing is skilled, and the reader is drawn effortlessly onwards. Thank you for your work.

Love it, needed something light and fluffy

Gahhhh!
This was so sweet and so great! Would love to read more!

and im reviewing, so write more. Love them soooo much! And here's an idea for you to screw around with, what if david bowie was the result of Jareth being bored and deciding that being a glam rocker aboveground was a good idea?
just a thought.

squeeeeee! *jumping up & down for joy*

That was fast

1.) Why are there human/ humanoids when Sarah didn't encounter any?

2.) Why are the goblins in the castle less intelligent than the ones in the City?

3.) I'm only asking these questions b/c I genuinely want to hear your thoughts on these decisions. I love discussing possibilities. x3

teehee!

I loved it! I can't wait to read what comes next!

Great! All three story is soo Epic! with Lixxle's Rosalinda cameo. :D

Again, ever so wonderful. Love all the Lixxle shoutouts and your own inside jokes. 3

-Arciere

I'm in love with this story :D

i loved this story!

Adorable story :)

As is said in, " The Little Princess' one of my fav stories of all times, " All girls are princesses," or something along those lines, all girls deserve to be princesses on sweet sixteens. So few don't get it. I guess Sarah really did get hers.

And about Karen, she is not a very nice person in my opinion. Very spoiled, one of the ladies that lunch, upper, middle class spoilt diva. Ah, what would happen to her if it was all suddenly pulled out from under her, say her husband lost all his investments, and they suddenly lost the house. Hummmmmmm.

Or say Jareth turned her into a toad for twelve hours and let her with the memories of eating flies. Or he turned into a mouse and chased her in his owl form. Or he appeared before her in her living room in full battle regalia and goblin armor, glaring, hands on hips ready for revenge, circling her padding around like the predator he is, fingetips to chin dripping with sarcasm. What if someone wished away Karen, like her son, in frustration there are endless possiblities.

Plot bunnie of my own I will NEVER pursue.

Glad to help add up the reviews. I would never do one long review. It would just be too overwhelming. I am trying to go back and read this before I send it. Glasses are weak and this print is about ten font. Don't know how to make it larger. Computer refuses.

Now onto to ' more adult type touching.' I wonder were Lizzie, don't blame me for that one, every time I put in the right spelling, the computer changes it to Lizzie, yes, I know that is not her name, but, anyway, wondering where she came up with that. It is priceless.