so beautiful but I've been crying for the last 5 chaptersbummed that they didn't get their chance after everything they went through ... love your work! good luck with all your future writing !

That was cruel. Just as life can be. And often is. My tears flowed, my heart ACHED and my throat squeezed. I couldnt breathe.

My heart feels so heavy, like a weight pressing on my chest and my breathing is erratic. Its not fair. Love is supposed to win. This isnt right.

It was so beautiful. They were.

Why cant things just be the way they should? How can two people live this way? Its so sad. So, so sad.

And beautiful. Because love did win. In some way. A small way that never lets go. Always holds on.

And hope burns. Consumes.

Thank you for your writing this... making people FEEL these things. I wish there was an alternate ending. Where they finally got their forever. Where the marriage contract didnt happen. Maybe a spin off where harry and draco meet after the war and they get that forever. That it isnt just a dream. They deserve that, after everything. For the hopless romantics out there that like a good, happy ending.

You cruel. Tore my heart.
Dude whyyyy

Nice formatting.

it is beautiful

I don't know why or how but the last two guest reviews are from me. Guess I wasn't logged in at the time. Sry.

Now that tears have slowed and the tightness in my throat has lessened, can type again.

THANK YOU for sharing this amazing, loving, caring and heartbreaking story.
Words actually fail me atm, I can't express how deeply I'm touched by your story.

I do know that you've ruined me for any other Drarry fic. From every one I've read before nothing comes close to this story and I won't bother seeing anything does.

Truly beautiful. THANK YOU

I had to wait until my tears slowed down and I could breath through the tight knot in my throat before I could comment.

This story is soul wrenchingly beautiful.

You have completely ruined me for Drarry fics. I simply just can't read another one now. Nothing will come close to this one, nothing will touch me as deeply, or make me love them more.

THANK YOU for sharing this amazing, wonderful, beautiful, loving, caring (at time funny) and heartbreaking story. THANK YOU

I don't understand why Harry apologized to Ron. Harry was the wronged party Ron should have come to him.
Also the yelling happened after the truth game and not the party.

And when the kids were talking in he common room someone mentioned it was the beginning of October but it can't be as they've already had Halloween dinner and Harry was by the lake with Draco on the night his parents died. Just an FYI. Sry but inconsistencies bother me.

Very interesting POVs. Well done.

Have to say I'm a little disappointed that Harry didn't get annoyed that they were snagging on his bed. I'm mean really? Of all the rooms, they had to use that one.
Best friends or not, I'd be pissed.

On another note, beautiful moment between Drarry at the restaurant *sigh*

I'm enjoying this story so far. Just one little thing is bothering me, you've misspelt Blaises' last name. Its Zabini.

where is my submissive draco from the beginning

That made me cry so hard. Why couldn't they be together?! Aghhhh! That's so depressing!

Beautifully written story. I usually hold myself together but the ending just about killed me. The emotions and the storyline were perfect. Not all great stories have a happy ending.
There are not enough words to describe the brilliance of your writing. Amazing! Please never stop writing. Thank you for the wonderful emotional journey.