I was being serious and super focused until I read "magical porridge" and I snorted

"...to except magic?" I know that there are other many grammar errors in this story, but this was hard to ignore. 'Accept' should go in place of 'except'. They mean different things, and the former is the appropriate word in this context.
Sorry if this upsets you, but that's what reviews are for. To give constructive criticism that help you learn of and correct your mistakes.

i absolutely adored this fic! i read it in a couple days :))

What. The. Fuck. A. NAIL?!

Powerful story of loyalty and friendship!

Everyone needs a Margaret in their life. Touching chapter!

I wish I could explain to you how absolutely brilliant this entire story is. Im afraid I simply don't have the vocabulary for such a feat. This is amazing and I would recommend it to anyone. Well done.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THAT WAS SO GOOD YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER IN THE WHOLE FREAKING UNIVERSE!

Nimueh's ignorance is hilarious

You're such a dam good writer!

Ooooh foreshadowiiiiiing!

Your writing is so realistic, it makes me feel like I'm reading a real book!

I like the cover •

RLLY good and btw regulus arcturus black was not a villain he is an innocent Smol bean

WOOOOOOOOOW. I hope your still gonna finish this. I saw that the 3rd wasn't done then saw "sequel to..." And followed the trail back to this story. I LOVE series lol.

Ok this was beautifully done; the only complaint is "too much foreshadow..." I kept saying that throughout the story. Now what you did with Morgana I think was perfect (hard to come up with those things sometimes).

I REALLY hope your still working on this series or come back to it. Cause I wanna see the legend 8D