This was very exciting, your action was detailed without droning! I only regret that I do not recognize anything in here beyond Misaka. I have not hit double digits in the novels yet, so I assume these folks (or people like them if they're OCs) pop up later.

This makes me wonder what Misaka's "Sisters" are doing with their military training though...

Oh, and where was Touma during all this? Did someone mention there were bullets instead of Magic? (Would that actually stop him?)

If you continue, I think it would be enjoyable.

Though I did like the characters, I personally don't recognize them; it would be nice for the main character to show up.

I are confused D:

Too early to say anything much about this fic, though the fact that anti-skill has a special division isn't that surprising considering how many people break in and out of Academy City monthly w Oh and nice touch with the Arcana codenames :DDD

i kept expecting a master spark during the chapter ;D

good story so far, guna keep up with this one and see how it goes

is this supposed to be a crossover between TAMNI and black lagoon? i think not, isn't it?...well to be honest...it's good but still, it was still hard to swallow for me with that many nickname...and i don't quite get the battle..(maybe it's because of my poor english)...but keep it up...and

poor collin

Poor Collins. ;)