Reviews for Last Chance
Guest chapter 12 . 6/30
Hi! This is the first time I've read your work, and the story is just amazing. I love your characterization of Yukimura, Renji, Megumi, and Haruka. They're so distinct from each other. I also looove how clean your narration is and how you suggest even through the smallest details. It's been a while, and I'm not sure whether you'd see this, but thank you for sharing your talent to the fandom. I hope you're doing well!
303 Chocolate chapter 1 . 12/5/2017
Oh god, I can't believe myself. I knew this hasn't been updated in five years, but what do I do? Still read it. And then it turns out to be an awesome, well-written fic with interesting plot developments and fullflawed characters. That may never be finished, and I might not ever know what happens next.

Here's hoping this gets miraculously updated haha
Yukimura's wife chapter 12 . 11/1/2017
Update please?
siasuyee chapter 10 . 7/22/2017
Please continue the love story between yanagi renji and kurosawa megumi
siasuyee chapter 12 . 7/22/2017
Let yanagi renji fall in love with the girl yukimura talked about please
siasuyee chapter 1 . 7/22/2017
Let yanagi renji fall in love with a girl too please
ssyee123 chapter 12 . 4/16/2017
Let yanagi renji fall in love too
xxjaelee chapter 12 . 12/13/2015
First of all, i want to stay that i really love this story of yours. It's just, right in the feels you know.
I love how the words are written. It was flawless,maybe not for some people but for me, it is really flawless and i like it.
Yukimura Seichii in this story, it feels like i know him sooo much. The way you portrayed him is impressive. I really really want to know what happened to his past girlfriend. It must been soo hard to him to move on.
Yanagi Renji, the data master that we all know is an idiot when it comes to love. Hahahaha he's sooo cute.
And the two girls in this story, i like those two but i like Haruka the best. It's all because, somehow she's just like me :(). What a coincidence, right?
Anyway, Haruka's last name; Kasamatsu. I first thought her brother was Kasamatsu Yukio of Kuroko no Basuke xD HAHAHAHAHA And i was like OH EM GEEEEE

Overall, A and sooo on. It's just a shame that you didn't finish this story. I screamed sooo loud when there's no "Next" button anymore. Too bad. I hope you'll finish this :)
Meisa-tan chapter 12 . 4/5/2015
Any chance you'd pick up this fic again? Self-insert fics are so rare in the PoT fandom, especially good ones. I've been watching a Let's Play of Yukimura's route in the Tenipuri game, and it made me crave for fics like this. The plot of your story is rather good, I'm really curious as to what exactly happened with OC's brother and how (or if) Yukimura will be able to help the OC. :)
Onepiecelover4ever chapter 12 . 7/2/2014
Update ! Pls
Guest chapter 12 . 5/29/2014
NOOO! Why's this wonderful story not completed?! I really wanna know what happens to all of them. Does Haruka ever see her brother again? Will Renji and Megumi go out? Please update. I really wanna read the rest of the story.
angrypixels chapter 12 . 5/20/2014
I wonder if this will be updated!

And Haruka's dad is an ass
YunaBrown chapter 10 . 10/6/2013
...ahhhhhhh!
.GOD! I'm rooting for YanagiMegume!
I love this story...oh my god...Renji is so...ahhhhh!
:))
marshmellowluver chapter 12 . 8/28/2013
This story is so unique! I have never read on like this! I don't like it, I love it! Please update!
meijipucca chapter 11 . 8/3/2013
So Yukimura allowed Yanagi to play.
That troll.

Hahaha :)) I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!
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