wow that was really really good

This was beautiful.

I love that song! One of the reasons I read your story, good title. I loved this one shot. You have smart ways to connect the future to what is happening on the graveyard. Your sentence about Quinn's empty womb and the sentence about the crumpled tishue were magnificent. PLEASE keep on writing. (And I do mean in general with that.)

Fantastic story.

I'm not ashamed to admit I cried. If I could add a gif, I would.

buckets of

Oh god. This was heartbreaking. But so wonderfully writing. This is canon as far as I'm concerned :)

This was so amazing! Such raw emotion and perfect description. Excellent job!

Aw.

I mean, seriously, this was kind of incredibly amazingly... real. It just means a lot, and it was all meaningful and literate and awesome and sad.

That was dreadfully sad but amazingly well done! I loved it!

Your subtlety is amazing; you never say outright "she's going to hate the word drizzle and that's why she reacted so harshly to Finn." Nope, you just let the smile creep on my face as the words click together. Also, nice technique on letting the readers know their ages in such a unique way.

I'm writing this review as I'm reading it. So, I was just about to write "emo is never a good word to use" when you just threw that right in my face. Nice work.

Oh, I love it when authors capitalize the significant experiences. I've used it saying "it was That Day" but using "After" and "Before" is so...I'm running out of adjectives here, sorry. Just know that it's a positive compliment.

When she's talking about Santana's dad, it's hard to tell which paragraph was describing who's operation.

Every parentheses statement describing the future are brilliant, because of the SUBTLETY.

Maybe I should stop reviewing while I'm reading because then I just talk to much about everything you write.

'Once it's gone, she'll have no chance'. Okay, I gave up on that, because that sentence was just...amazing.

Power is always in few words, you achieved that in the final part.

Why was this review so long? It was only a one shot! Sorry, sorry. But still, adding it to my favourites, something I do not do lightly. Completely great.