Reviews for Brothers
His-Lady-Outlaw chapter 1 . 1/29/2018
i feel like im a bad person. cause the moment i read *bottle of pop* i was like. "well i know what side of the ditch your on...
Emily chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Please make a part 2!
Towelket chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Such a nice story!

Very warm and fuzzy but not sugar-vomiting.

I love your choice of names for the nations, I can so see Oz as "Stephen".

There are some grammatical errors but was interesting all the way through, nice touch in the ending with some blues.

Definately one of my favourite Ocianian fics.
freefall-gypsy chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
this is an awesome story and I was wondering if you could do a story with your "Brothers" on the arsonist(S) loose in Tasmania in late 2010 or even better the reactions of the "Brothers" to tasmania showing or telling them about the Tassie Devil going extinct in the wild in five years in 2011.
DrinkTeaMDear -toolazytosignin chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
Awww! This is cute (except for the bit about Kiribati and global warming D nooooo!). There is seriously not enough love for either NZ or Australia. And it was great that you included other, smaller countries (that I'm never heard of, shhhh ;] )

One thing, and I could totally be majorily wrong about places other than the state I live in (and NZ, for that matter) but when I hear people talking about a milk bar, it's pretty much a corner shop that sells newspapers, lollies, icecreams and sometimes random household things (like detergent and potato chips). Unless I've got your definition of 'take out' wrong (!). That's like, maccas and KFC, right? ...That's how I hear people refer to it anyway.

Either way, I've babbled on enough. Thanks heaps for this sweet oneshot, and keep up the great work!
Pheesh chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
And another thing :D the more commonly used slang for a New Zealander is, well, Kiwi. I've heard the term 'sheep shagger' maybe once in my life. And thongs are not sandals; they are classified as different things (sandals generally have straps and thongs are only held on by the one toe) anyway don't mind me; I still loved this story :D
FISH chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
Loved it loved it loved it :D note: Pavlova is not necessarily made with kiwifruit; any fruit will do :) I especially love it with strawberries :3 also, good work on not defining it an being a kiwi or Aussie dish; there are soooooo many arguments between the average kiwi and the average Aussie over where it came from lol :3 also, I haven't gotten up to the point in the series where the introduce Australia, but do they really classify Tassie an a different character? It's always been considered a state of Australia. otherwise, loved it and great job :D
sodeepitsshallow chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
D'aww. That was very sweet and while still bringing up some important elements of the family's everyday life.

However, I do have a few suggestions. At times your story felt a bit abrupt and it made the story feel a bit rushed. You have such wonderful characters, it wouldn't hurt to spend a bit more time making sure your readers know everyone (Unless you've written something else with them? I shall check after this.) One more thing I would recommend is that you provide a guide with the human names paired with the country names at the beginning (I was a little confused on who was who)

But other than those tiny touches, I thoroughly enjoyed this.

Keep writing~
e-na-ka chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
This was sooo cute!

Um, btw, i think you should change the tag because you tagged Austria instead of Australia.

Either ways, good work!