Please add another chapter, you are a very good writer

You should definentely write more (longer) stories like this... Well done ! xx

That was very cute, I think they are so mightily cute together! the sad hting is, I've watched like 5 episodes. But I think the show is great, too bad i have no idea where to find them in order. Oh well. This story was cute and it leaves you wondering what will happen. You didn't answer the question, which lead to a nice question in the readers mind: what did MaskedNarnianQueen plan? I think that was nicely thought out. You had some missing and spelling errors that could easily be fixed, but I still think it was mightily good. Continue with the wonderful work! Do you plan to write more for these two?

liked this!

'Tis a great fic, my friend... sorry I went all medieval again. No, seriously, love it. Good fic and captures the scene of "Best Before Date" very well. Good job.

Meph out

cute story, and also very good. Well done