that was awesome, well done!

ummm y is prince charming called greg...?

Awesome! I spend the whole night just to finished this. I love their real names and the way the prince is being so sweet and romantic.

Have you also watched the Japanese version of Cinderella? It was actually a series entitled "Cinderella Monogatari". Hope you can also try to write a story for that. Thank you for this story too!

I love that name very suited for a princess

I loved this story I have been obsessed with Cinderella lately and this story made my dreams come true ;) good job

I love it really
I wished for something to happen and it did your story came

wow that was wonderful

Katherine Elizabeth and Greg and Lucy Beth ar happy but not when Greg's father the king died

I love that you named him Greg! It fits him. I don't know enough about Disney's version of Cindy to know if that is his "official" name, so I am going to assume you came up with it.
This is a nice start to "Happily ever after"! Again, I love your writing. :-)

I loved it! You should do more, I can't find any like this ! :)

That was so cute

How sad, great story by the way.

OH MY FLIPPING GOSH! LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY! 1.)I loved how you kept the characters personalities steady and remarkably accurate. 2.)I only spotted a handful of errors while reading. 3.)I was able to use imagery and it was more like watching a movie in my head. 4.)I ADORE the fact that it had so many features that spiked suspense, curiosity, happiness, and many other emotions. 5.)You have a splendid imagination and it was incredibly enjoyable and shows major potential. 6.)You Used all of the characters and then some in this beautiful story of your's and I loved Rachel! 7.)It was Truely a Happily Ever After. :)

OMG! Mini Cinderella! Love this, it's so cute and really romantic.

Absolutely excellent and enticing fanfic.
Well Done.