I hope they got John out!

Where's john? What happen?! This must not be the end!

Loved this! I so wish that it was canon!

But where's John, do they find John

Awesome story!

AWWWWWW! The Holmes bros. You gotta love them:)

fantastic!

So what happens to John?

Another chapter maybe? Please!

PLEASE write another part to this! You can't just leave us there!

Wonderful job. It's a good thing you used short sentences during the more dramatic parts. This helped create the tense atmosphere and gave a great result. I was hoping there would be something about John being found at the end but the whole story's still great.

Aww very suitable ending to that bloody cliff-hanger!

good work, I hope there is more to come!

This was so...awesome! The beginning to middle were very angsty, very mentally-based. Everything was mostly a thought-process, which made it feel like we were getting a small glimpse of the inner workings of the characters.

I like to read other fanfiction authors' versions of what the ending will be. I honestly have no idea, but there are endless choices from which we have to choose. The creators gave us such a short cliffhanger ending, so there are many interpretations of it until they come out with season 2. I'm glad you joined the bandwagon in this because it's a very interesting concept. The possibilities are endless with this idea.

The last few parts were very entertaining and sweet. :) I liked how you showed their brotherly love for each other.

aww poor Sherlock, I always thought head injuries are the worst thing he could have, a man that prides himself in his mind and to have his mind scrambled like that must be torture. Very well done, will there be more?