Interesting... I liked it.

It's Gut not Gute.
But good story anyways.

Aww so cute so cute! Loved the ending. Absolutely adorable!

One thing the German word for shit is Scheisse not scheibe. The eszett or scharfes S (Sharp S) ( ß this Letter) Looks like a B but it's pronounced As a double s.

Ah, es tut mir leid...it's a pet peeve of mine to correct someone when they misspell Scheisse with a B.

the story was great!

That reminds me of an old West Tale... It's interesting. This guy was in a gun fight, and he got shot, but the penny in his breast pocket saved his life. :/ Not sure if that's 100% correct, though...
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GAHHH! I thought for sure Ludwig was done for! Thank goodness for that metal cross of his! *wipes tears* Very well written. Excellent story, excellent! *claps*

that is so sweet. the way they help eachother be strong.

awwwww it was so adorable and cute i love the ending :D

Aww, this was really cute. The p