| Reviews for The Pitfall |
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   animefangurlcraz chapter 1 . 6/8 great ending for the first chapter! |
| FutureNargleHunter chapter 11 . 6/4 Why does Ron Weasley speak like a hillbilly from Texas? |
| Aabshdoe chapter 3 . 3/30 You would think fighting in a war as one of the spear heads makes you more apt at magic then the lackey for the other side. Alas that is not the case and nor is the case that murdering a child is a dampner on any sexual dalliances. But no, quite occ, written well but no cigar. |
| HollyNinetales chapter 7 . 3/27 "so what hole did you crawl out of" I CACKLED omg hilarious |
| H.H. Knight chapter 1 . 10/24/2019 I thought this story was very interesting and captivated my attention. I would have liked to see more of a resolution or a sense of finality in the ending. I feel much was left unanswered. |
| Ellae chapter 6 . 8/25/2019 Really great, artfully portrayed the many complex emotions here, especially between Hermione and Ron and inside Draco’s head. Enjoying this a lot. e |
| nap2606 chapter 31 . 7/9/2019 So well written. I could barley put it down. Thank you for sharing. Can’t wait to see where you take this story. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/11/2019 This is so well written. And the characters are very believable. Just... just... well done :-). Cant decide if I want to cancel my plans for the rest of the day to keep reading or if I want to savour it :-) |
| WizardMichi chapter 27 . 5/8/2019 I hate Theo so much! |
| WizardMichi chapter 26 . 5/8/2019 im really, really sick of Ron at this point. Hes always so pushy and abrasive. Ugh. Im also sick of Malfoy. Like, wtf bro get it together. He is always thinking he can handle shit on his own, and just because he thinks over several scenarios, he is right in whatever choice he makes. Hermione was right in saying he should have confided in her and I dont blame her for feeling like they dont give her enough credit. Harry seems to be the only sensible one right now. lol. And dont even get me started on Theo. Im not looking forward to his presence in future chapters. |
| WizardMichi chapter 11 . 5/6/2019 snaps for Lunaaaaaaaaa |
| WizardMichi chapter 3 . 5/6/2019 I wasn't expecting this to happen so quickly but I'm not mad at it. it was well done and I am excited to see if they get awkward or if one pursues the other now, or if they both get upset with themselves. so many possibilities. |
| annapsarudaki chapter 20 . 5/1/2019 I wonder what's up with Nathan. |
| annapsarudaki chapter 7 . 4/30/2019 I'm enjoying this story a lot. Snape as the new wannabe Dark Lord? Now that is a surprise! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/19/2019 Draco kills a kid and hermione fucks him oh how so like the granger we all know and love. |
