I like it, a lot. Anyway if do a second chapter Jounouchi should find out. Just a idea. Good Luck with your writings!

At first I thought that the girl that had Jounouchi's attention was Anzu. But then I was like "Uh wait, when has he ever had attraction towards her? Oh yeah...Mai...it's probably her..." lol

Hmm I like dark Yugi XD I like how he thought back to Bakura and Marik with their crazy ways. Oh and him going nakey was pretty cool too.

XD

i wish it was longer

wow. that's pretty awesome the description of what was happening was perfect